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So Sad, Mama

SO SAD, MAMA I dreamt of you last night, the very first time since you passed away. Woke up this morning wondering, was it because I was following up on your headstone yesterday, asking for an update? Been almost six months since you passed on and I still have not shed a tear. How I wish I could cry, let tears run down. Maybe, tears would wash away the sadness, hurt, pain that our estrangement caused; a weak, frail, fragile bond. Never nurtured, never strengthened at all. You gave me to your sister when I was one; but only knew after you passed on that you never told Papa until I was gone and it broke his heart. So sad, Mama! 7/13/21 Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Constance La France Used: PS Grammar Check

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Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2021 8:19:00 AM

Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look beautiful, well done, such a sad thing you experienced that still haunts you ~Constance

Bhawana Pant

Date: 8/14/2021 12:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ,Evans.Very poignant.

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/14/2021 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Bhawana. Have a great day.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 9:10:00 PM

Marilene , congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/13/2021 11:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Eve. Have a good week-end.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/13/2021 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What an amazing story/write. Life is filled with hurt and heart break. So Very Sorry. Sometimes one cannot cry and that is OK. I have learned one cannot change the past. May you find peace. Today, be blessed....................

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/13/2021 12:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. Yes, we just have to accept what we cannot change, no matter how heart breaking. I had so many of them, this is just one. I am so grateful for His presence in my life that kept me going through the life path He laid for me.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/13/2021 11:17:00 AM

Your story is filled with such pain, Marilene - heartbreak. You have skillfully aticulated the sense of abandonment. My heart breaks for you. But, I send you congratulations on your win. In my prayers. Sending you blessings of continuing consolation.

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/13/2021 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, thank you Sam. I appreciate you sending me blessings. Your consolation eases the pain. Have a Blessed week-end.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/13/2021 8:09:00 AM

Tough times. A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/13/2021 12:06:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj. I appreciate it.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 7/13/2021 1:49:00 PM

Wow! What heartache you’ve had to deal with. I’m sorry! Great poem about it. The Emotions you evoke makes me feel them with you.

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/13/2021 2:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jennifer for letting me know how my poem moved you. Thank you too for your emotional support. I appreciate it tremendously.