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Wallflowers with their mournful faces raised, and others too, asleep with heads hung low, are seen against the wall, alone and dazed... poor wallflowers all stationed in a row. And others too, asleep with heads hung low; stems drooping, bent and twisted, on display. Poor wallflowers all stationed in a row, like potted, faded plants, no role to play. Stems drooping, bent and twisted, on display; they come and go, have learned to acquiesce. Like potted, faded plants, no role to play; those weak and wilted flowers in distress. They come and go, have learned to acquiesce; in old, worn wheelchairs, sit discouraged souls. Those weak and wilted flowers in distress, sit facing death; they know there are no goals. In old, worn wheelchairs, sit discouraged souls; are seen against the wall, alone and dazed. Sit facing death, they know there are no goals. Wallflowers with their mournful faces raised. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Dust Off A Memory Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 10/29/2017 I wrote about this sad memory, which was intensely frozen in my mind when I visited a local nursing home.

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Date: 10/30/2017 10:24:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/30/2017 9:22:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, oh this hit home for me, I used to work in a nursing home and this poem is not fiction, I saw this happening each and every day, so sad, for sure !
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Date: 10/30/2017 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. This memory is so vivid in my mind, that this was the third time I wrote a poem about it. Thank you so much for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/29/2017 7:15:00 PM
Sandra, this is such a beautiful, well-written, heart-wrenching poem. Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 10:13:00 AM
Janice, thank you very much for your uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/29/2017 12:11:00 PM
Such a vivid picture you paint in this sad memory. Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/29/2017 9:36:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I agree, this is such a sad memory. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Alexis, for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/29/2017 9:00:00 AM
Congrats Sandra to win top place on your touchy sad poem Love.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hi, Anisha, thank you for your nice comment and congratulations. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/29/2017 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. This sad pantoum is so beautifully written. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for reading my poem, and for your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 10/23/2017 3:16:00 PM
A beautiful meaning metaphor for a sad scene. Well done, Sandra, my compliments!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2017 4:11:00 PM
Ralph, thank you so much for reading my poem and for your supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 10/23/2017 12:41:00 PM
I’ve seen this sadness too. Well written.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2017 4:10:00 PM
MD, I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Thank you so much. Sandra

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