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So Sad, This Memory


Wallflowers with their mournful faces raised,    	
   and others too, asleep with heads hung low,   	
are seen against the wall, alone and dazed...   	
   poor wallflowers all stationed in a row.     		

And others too, asleep with heads hung low;   	
   stems drooping, bent and twisted, on display.   	
Poor wallflowers all stationed in a row,  			
   like potted, faded plants, no role to play. 		

Stems drooping, bent and twisted, on display; 	
   they come and go, have learned to acquiesce. 		
Like potted, faded plants, no role to play; 		
   those weak and wilted flowers in distress. 			

They come and go, have learned to acquiesce; 		
   in old, worn wheelchairs, sit discouraged souls. 	  
Those weak and wilted flowers in distress, 		
   sit facing death; they know there are no goals.	
	
In old, worn wheelchairs, sit discouraged souls; 	
   are seen against the wall, alone and dazed.  	
Sit facing death, they know there are no goals.	
   Wallflowers with their mournful faces raised.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Dust Off A Memory
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 10/29/2017 	          

I wrote about this sad memory, which
was intensely frozen in my mind
when I visited a local nursing home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, oh this hit home for me, I used to work in a nursing home and this poem is not fiction, I saw this happening each and every day, so sad, for sure !
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Constance. This memory is so vivid in my mind, that this was the third time I wrote a poem about it. Thank you so much for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Sandra, this is such a beautiful, well-written, heart-wrenching poem. Congratulations on your win! Janice
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Janice, thank you very much for your uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Davey Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Such a vivid picture you paint in this sad memory. Congrats on your win
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Hi Sandra, I agree, this is such a sad memory. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Thank you very much, Alexis, for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Dutta Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Congrats Sandra to win top place on your touchy sad poem Love.
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Hi, Anisha, thank you for your nice comment and congratulations. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. This sad pantoum is so beautifully written. John
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much, John, for reading my poem, and for your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Sergi Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 3:16 PM
A beautiful meaning metaphor for a sad scene. Well done, Sandra, my compliments!
Haight Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Ralph, thank you so much for reading my poem and for your supportive comments. Sandra
Johnson Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 12:41 PM
I’ve seen this sadness too. Well written.
Haight Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:10 PM
MD, I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Thank you so much. Sandra
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