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Pulses repeated pulses ripping to the core I ache for so much more Body spent content but raging to be pushed hard towards a wreckage lain lost Thrust forth with tiny fingers anchoring an aging frame Enticing gasps of pleasure tittered through the night Pulses repeated pulses take hold my weary might squeeze past the apprehension caress the sunburst light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 12:05:00 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:09:00 PM
yeow, it's getting sultry in here... right on, tim..huggs
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Date: 7/19/2017 1:07:00 PM
Well done Tim! I blush at my interpretation.
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Date: 7/19/2017 8:13:00 AM
Reads to me as if you could be putting someone to bed. I always have trouble deciphering your poems:) But still I try. Nice write Tim.
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:41:00 AM
Wow Tim, that's an intense poem on every level. Beautiful my friend
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Date: 7/18/2017 5:16:00 PM
Pulsing with passion Tim! :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:56:00 PM
Pulses repeated on a sweet passionate love... beautiful dear Tim :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:47:00 PM
That's a poem of completed fruition and intensity, Tim.
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:38:00 PM
Very soft and sensual my friend. Nicely crafted poetry.
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Date: 7/18/2017 1:13:00 PM
So much passion Tim, well done.
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Date: 7/18/2017 1:02:00 PM
Absolutely stunning! The imagery is amazing!
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