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So Many Questions Were you watching the same moon as I? The bright smiling moon, low down in the sky Were you watching it when I at last said goodnight? Did you catch that kiss sent on the glow of moonlight? Did you close you eyes in sleep, as the moon passed on by? Did you catch my dreams to keep them safe, not let them die? Were you hugging your pillow so tight to your chest? Leaving kisses on the pillow where my head should be pressed. Did you wake to see the same moon, then go to sleep? Were my dreams in your arms, there for you to keep? To keep for a short while till you give them back to me? Where we can share them together that is my decree. © 29/11/2012 ~GG~

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Date: 12/3/2012 11:32:00 AM
As a matter of fact all the answers are true.
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Date: 12/3/2012 11:57:00 AM
Thanks John xx
Date: 12/2/2012 10:09:00 AM
You are a moonchild as evidenced by this work. Do you know the soen "Moonchild" by King Crimson Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:22:00 AM
Hi there Mathew , no I don't know 'Moonchild' but I will look it up and hope its a compliment. Thanks xx
Date: 12/1/2012 5:28:00 PM
I do not know if you are getting my replies to your fine compliments ?, so here they all are . Once again
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:27:00 PM
Mandy, Thank You. This time the rhyme has nothing to do ( directly ) with me, or my lifes experiences, although I am sure that most old men could envision a similar senario for the end days of their lives. This rhyme, actually, was given birth, inspired by the movie of the same name, as the title, with Mickey Rourke , that I watched, late last night. Strange how us bad boy / old men want to be do-gooders, save a wayward soul, especially where a sweet young thing is concerned. Love Bill .
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:26:00 PM
5X8Y Sorry for the Linda, in my last response Mandy, a seniors moment, and yes my bath was hot, hot! as is my dream / reverie, but reality is, pink, the Princess, is as cold as deep space, would make the Antarctic seem like Hawaii, at least as far as her feelings for me are concerned. Bill. ( B. J. “A” 2 ).
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:25:00 PM
I am glad that I was able to shed some light onto the darkness Linda, and eliminate some of the shadows of the uncertainties, the lack of clarity that comes to one in the form of poetry that lingers on in the minds of the readers and may be misinterpreted by the readers own life’s experiences as they see the words and feel from their own perspective. B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill. )
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Mandy : ( My middle daughter’s name , by the way. M.L.A. ) - For the comment, and for liking my stuff and yes life is full sadness and for much more serious reasons then the sadness’s I have portrayed within my? Dreams come and go and if we are lucky some we get to touch the edges of, get to know. When I get back I will read your poetry, and suspect that it will be very good. Bill.
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Date: 12/1/2012 3:15:00 PM
Oh you are real LUCKY I'm happy you are happy! Light & Love
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Date: 12/2/2012 3:13:00 AM
Thanks Debbie Shalom ve'ahavah xx
Date: 12/1/2012 2:51:00 PM
This is wonderful Mandy, Thanks for stopping by with your comment. Hazel :-)
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Date: 12/2/2012 3:09:00 AM
My pleasure hazel xx
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Date: 12/2/2012 3:09:00 AM
And thanks xx
Date: 11/30/2012 9:35:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. If YOU where asking me the answers are all YES and if not I hope all his answers where Yes. YOUR Laureatus Talent Shines as a Beacon LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/30/2012 10:49:00 AM
You are sweet Harry xx
Date: 11/30/2012 5:00:00 AM
this is lovely Mandy, more than just words, you paint such a vivid scene with this, and all of your poetry..
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Date: 11/30/2012 10:48:00 AM
Thanks harry xx
Date: 11/29/2012 9:54:00 PM
Oh my Mandy that is romantic plus. Love it. Is t for a contest? If so would be a winner. ....Seren
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:12:00 AM
No contest Seren just reading a soppy book lol xx
Date: 11/29/2012 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful love song. I love it, Mandy. It sounds so romantic and dreamy. It's like it is dusting you like a feather, softly. Great write. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:12:00 AM
How sweet what a fantastic line that is 'dusting you like a feather' love that xx
Date: 11/29/2012 3:15:00 PM
this is quite romantic, and I do love romantic poems! Mandy did you mean I needed to be MORE modest in my thanksgiving poem or less so? hahaha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:11:00 AM
I just thought it was great sweetie ,ues feeling a bit mushy but I'm sure it will go lol xx
Date: 11/29/2012 1:06:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your romantic and creative work this afternoon...I am glad that I chose it to read..Your gift as a poet is wonderful..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2012 1:12:00 PM
Thanks you Sara that means a lot to me I am learning by reading from poets like yourself xx
Date: 11/29/2012 10:52:00 AM
Very sweet poem, Mandy, and I hope all the answers to the questions were a resounding yes! Btw just a question- I am curious-- did you see green underlined words in my latest post? thanks!
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Date: 11/29/2012 12:14:00 PM
ha ha have to wait and see nikko, in fact my dreams usually get squashed before they have left my head lol and yes there are green info links in everywhere what a pain they are.xx
Date: 11/29/2012 10:28:00 AM
Awesome romantic write, Mandy!! Jag
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Date: 11/29/2012 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Jag, your comments are always appreciated xx
Date: 11/29/2012 8:41:00 AM
Hi Mandy, this is really brilliant. Love all the images. Rollo
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:44:00 AM
Awh thanks Rollo, that's much appreciated xx

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