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“Jesus, Lover of my soul, Let me to Thy bosom fly While the nearer waters roll, While the tempest still is high!” This is the first verse of the hymn “JESUS, LOVER OF MY SOUL” penned by Charles Wesley
Secured in my Saviour’s compassion breast Blest to be so loved, though undeserving Oh, my heart in Jesus Christ finds sweet rest Precious best Friend*, eternally loving. Offering boundless mercy, hope and grace God reaches my soul, granting full pardon Settling me around His divine embrace Precious best Friend, eternally loving. Facing trials, my faith valiantly stands Upheld by the Lord, triumphantly strong He’s my Fortress, vanquishing doubt-demands Precious best Friend, eternally loving. As called steward for His work partnership My spirit exalts the Supreme Master While blissfully meeting Him in worship Precious best Friend, eternally loving.
*Proverbs 17:17 A friend loveth at all times... John 15:13 Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. August 9, 2020 2nd place, "In honor of Charles Wesley" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues; judged on 9/3/2020.

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Date: 9/4/2020 4:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Beata. A hymn not often sung in our area; but one with a beautiful message of love and forgiveness. My favorite your last stanza of thanksgiving for what He has done.
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Date: 9/3/2020 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Very Beautiful" I Love This Poem. Enjoy your day and win with blessings..............
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:44:00 AM
I really like your phrase "Precious best friend...". Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:44:00 AM
Wonderful take on the theme, Beata. Who better for a friend and partner than Jesus? Congratulations on your win! prayers and blessings...
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Date: 9/3/2020 9:42:00 AM
Love the third verse - very strong with powerful language. Beata, congratulations on 2nd place in my contest!
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