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So I May Dream

Let us curry favor in dog star's splendid laughing light bring the crash of passion's waves through two arms held tight. I carry your wishes in love's knapsack, strapped close in tomorrow's hope fashioned in new dawn's golden charms. Bring empathy in touch understanding where once was none, gone in sorrow's parting. Grant me true sight unbridled, like a child's reaching song.. your gleam in smile. Rein in gallop of heartbeat hooves grant me sleep so I may dream.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/5/2023 7:56:00 AM

Yes, dream please. A belated congrats on your POTD my friend. his is a wonderful poem. Many a time I 've myself prayed for true sight. A definitive fav. Your verses are exceptional my friend. God bless.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/27/2022 2:30:00 PM

Remember me? I did not die!)) had been in hospital and learning to walk. Belated Congrats on a fabulous POTD Panagiota

Linda Milgate

Date: 5/22/2022 12:54:00 PM

very nice glad I found it today.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2022 4:40:00 PM

I'm seeing you got POTD for this? Congrats. Well deserved.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 3/13/2022 4:24:00 PM

Stunning poem with beautiful imagery. A dreamy and enchanting piece.

Anil Deo

Date: 3/9/2022 10:35:00 AM

Amazing. Loved most of the last stanzas. Shalom shalom Paz

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/25/2022 3:33:00 PM

How pretty, so sweet and lovely! I see it was a POTD a few days back, congratulations! It is a beautiful poem <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 4:06:00 PM

this is so poetic, so dreamy. You are awesome!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/22/2022 10:11:00 AM

A lovely poem and the imagery enchants ... Keep up the wonderful writing, Richard!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/22/2022 4:49:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD, Richard ~

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/22/2022 4:11:00 AM

Stunning visual~deep and meaningful. Perfect POTD choice! Love it! "unbridled, like a child's reaching song.." Wow!

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/19/2022 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Enjoyed! Blessings ~ Debra

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 2/19/2022 2:06:00 AM

Great poem, well written. Congrats on POTD...Ron

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2022 9:20:00 PM

"I carry your wishes in love's knapsack, strapped close in tomorrow's hope fashioned in new dawn's golden charms" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/18/2022 8:22:00 PM

". . . so I may dream" Because anything is possible. This is beautiful in so many wonderful ways. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/18/2022 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! I love the 4th stanza: Grant me true sight etc. :)Paulette

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/18/2022 9:35:00 AM

So many beautiful lines Richard... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani

Eve Roper

Date: 2/18/2022 8:52:00 AM

Very endearing verse, Richard, congratulations on POTD.

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2022 8:47:00 AM

Richard, beautiful and congratulations on the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/18/2022 7:57:00 AM

My husband has been having trouble sleeping lately, so those closing lines really resonate with me, also love your lines 'splendid laughing light' and 'dawn's golden charms' - excellent poem, very deserving of POTD!