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So Grateful

As the sun bestows its warm glow Farther than the eye can see The wind is magnificent today Grand, relentless and amused As if excited by the reaction of Its stirring up perfumes from Rusty limbs of now flowering trees At the feet of giant swaying clusters of pink and white blooms Chipmunks and squirrels joyously frolic No doubt exhilarated by this first precocious summer afternoon Intoxicating scents fill the air As I gleefully let my nostrils and my soul take it all in Appreciating the musical rustling of leaves and flowers As if shaking off any last remains of Wintry dust and decay As if God is running his fingers Through the blooms of his creation And is happy with his gift AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on September 6, 2017 for contest ENTER YOUR OWN COMPETITION sponsored by CECELIA HOPKINS-DREWER - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 4/19/2018 6:48:00 PM
This is a wonderful display of gratititude that I see you garnered an excellent placement with. Belated Congrats.
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/25/2017 11:03:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Have an awesome week !!
Date: 9/25/2017 10:39:00 AM
Line, congratulations on your win with this beautifully penned poem !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/25/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thanks so much. Have a marvelous week !
Date: 8/28/2017 2:58:00 AM
glorious write, line..i was there savoring the gifts of nature.. this would be good for the uplifting contest... see you again!...huggs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2017 7:25:00 AM
I appreciate your feedback. Thank you and have a wonderful day.
Date: 8/27/2017 8:31:00 PM
Hi Line. I am back to say, it appears that contest reached the deadline, so it is closed now.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2017 7:28:00 AM
No it was up for a couple of days, deadline was Sept.19 and I've been checking the closed contests for days now. There must have been a reason. Happens... Thanks again & take care.
Date: 8/27/2017 7:19:00 PM
This is so beautiful. I like the line stirring up perfumes...and the ending of this is perfect. I enjoyed this. Well written :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/27/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I wanted to submit this poem in the BLOWING IN THE WIND contest with Sept.19 deadline but the contest mysteriously disappeared...

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