So Grateful

As the sun bestows its warm glow
Farther than the eye can see
The wind is magnificent today
Grand, relentless and amused
As if excited by the reaction of
Its stirring up perfumes from
Rusty limbs of now flowering trees

At the feet of giant swaying clusters of pink and white blooms
Chipmunks and squirrels joyously frolic
No doubt exhilarated by this first precocious summer afternoon

Intoxicating scents fill the air
As I gleefully let my nostrils and my soul take it all in
Appreciating the musical rustling of leaves and flowers
As if shaking off any last remains of
Wintry dust and decay

As if God is running his fingers
Through the blooms of his creation
And is happy with his gift



AP: 2nd place 2021

Submitted on September 6, 2017 for contest ENTER YOUR OWN COMPETITION sponsored by CECELIA HOPKINS-DREWER  -  RANKED 1ST

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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 6:48 PM
This is a wonderful display of gratititude that I see you garnered an excellent placement with. Belated Congrats.
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Thanks Eve. Have an awesome week !!
La France Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Line, congratulations on your win with this beautifully penned poem !
Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Thanks so much. Have a marvelous week !
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 2:58 AM
glorious write, line..i was there savoring the gifts of nature.. this would be good for the uplifting contest... see you again!...huggs
Gauthier Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:25 AM
I appreciate your feedback. Thank you and have a wonderful day.
Sands Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Hi Line. I am back to say, it appears that contest reached the deadline, so it is closed now.
Gauthier Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:28 AM
No it was up for a couple of days, deadline was Sept.19 and I've been checking the closed contests for days now. There must have been a reason. Happens... Thanks again & take care.
Sands Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:19 PM
This is so beautiful. I like the line stirring up perfumes...and the ending of this is perfect. I enjoyed this. Well written :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I wanted to submit this poem in the BLOWING IN THE WIND contest with Sept.19 deadline but the contest mysteriously disappeared...
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