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So Cries the Dove

The mourning dove cries soft and low "Where ARE you, you, you..." Breezes soflty blow, lifting the humidity for a gasp of too brief, cool air Silent is the robin as she eyes the cat slinking through the grasses below her nest "Where ARE you, you, you.." Mighty trees sing boldly at a whisper as the wind gusts with urgency... trying to drive away the heat that beats down with the unbearable weight of lethargy "you, you, Where ARE you, you, you..." Afternoon sun finally gives way to evening shades, submitting its weary grasp, a tenuous hold flora and fauna sigh relief as the heat retreats on the heels of the sun New life is born into the air with the coolness of waxing shadows stretching across the land Soon the stars, will be winking promises and dreams will shoot across the sky "Where ARE you, you , you..." the question goes unanswered.

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Date: 4/26/2009 4:47:00 PM
Trudy, how perfectly delightful! yes! this poem captures the cadence of the Mourning Dove exactly! and you have imparted great emotion into this wistful call!!! we should have a "dove section" on the soup!! trully a memorable subject, thanks for the referral, and please tell me about other poems I should notice! it's so hard to keep up on the soup!@thanks for your kind words! Jim
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Date: 9/20/2008 5:58:00 AM
Trudy! This is a great piece. creative artfull and it put me in nature in natures heat which i try to avoid. but i enjoyed the piece very much. John H. Loving III
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Date: 9/19/2008 7:11:00 PM
Trudy this is a very exceptional poem that is amazingly well written - You will most certainly be a pleasure to read - God Bless
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Date: 9/19/2008 3:14:00 PM
this is a beautiful write, with vivid imagery welcome to the soup, take care D-nyce
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