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Snowstorm

grim starkness of snow sturdy in its sleeted falling willing a bleached landscape a lushness that chokes the rough field terrain strides of power as the fevered wind spirals In an unexpected direction inflates drifts like the arched back of a cat whitening truant brown borders of decay to bury even shadows bare trees by fence lines slump like hollow men in a protected sanctuary of cold re-shaping confessions that slip in winter chill extinction Poem composed January 3, 2023

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 1/19/2024 9:02:00 PM

Oh gosh, funny I would come across this poem tonight. Right now in the northeast we are having an absolute white out with almost 6 inches of snow so far. I think it's pretty actually. "A bleached landscape" perfectly describes my back yard. What a clever description. I love metaphors. I liked your line, "bare trees by fence lines, slump like hallow men" I can see them as I read, a perfect description. Clever, clever, clever!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2024 9:12:00 PM

Winter sometimes has a long and lasting hold. I hope your snowstorm isn't too severe. Thank you, Marikate, for your drop by + supportive message. Stay safe + warm. There's more of a white numbness to come. Thinking of you, Brian

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/23/2023 9:06:00 PM

Dear Brian, I'm enraptured by your artistic portrayal of a snowstorm. Such vivid imagery and metaphors come alive on the poetic page with the splendid sorcery of your enchanted pen. I absolutely adore "inflates drifts like the arched back of a cat" -yes! It is exactly like that.. and "bare trees by fence lines slump like hollow men" - indeed they do! Your Snowstorm warms and stirs my imagination like a steaming cup of cocoa on a winter's eve. Brilliant every verse, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/23/2023 9:13:00 PM

Dear Susan, If my poem could match your uplifting appraisal, I'd be the most happy fellow on Poetrysoup's fertile ground. Thank you immensely. Canada's bleak January weather is inspiration for many a snow heavy verse. Be well. With much appreciation, Brian

Deb M

Date: 1/22/2023 6:24:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem Brian…..Debx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/22/2023 6:45:00 AM

Very appreciative of your drop by + comment, Deb. Not too many snowstorms in our locale this year. Saves one's back. Thanks again, Brian

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/11/2023 9:47:00 PM

Creative way of describing a snowstorm!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/11/2023 9:49:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet, for your stop by + message. Sincerest regards, Brian

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/9/2023 1:44:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/9/2023 7:23:00 AM

Best wishes for a grand 2023 Beata. Thank you for your stop by + message of hope. Yours truly, Brian

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/7/2023 2:41:00 PM

an excellent piece rich in imagery, written in your signature style..did it not garner a win in the winter storm contest? i'm very surprised, but i see it's a winner in another contest, and rightly so!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/7/2023 3:29:00 PM

Thanks very much, Charlotte. My final stanza did not comply with contest rules (or so I believed) so I refrained from its entry. As always, much appreciative of your appraisal. Be well. Brian

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2023 2:40:00 PM

Very nice, Brian!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/7/2023 3:27:00 PM

Thanks very much, Kim. I thought my last stanza did not comply with your contest guidelines so I did not submit it. However, your prompt was spot on to push our pens. Sincerest regards. Brian

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/6/2023 6:29:00 AM

Powerful an moving and I can visualize the scene vividly! Congratulations on your win Brian!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/6/2023 6:32:00 AM

Greetings Linda, Thanks very much for your positive, encouraging message. Our snow drifts are currently puddles. Tough on our toddlers with sleds. Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Thomas Wells

Date: 1/5/2023 9:37:00 PM

"...inflates drifts like the arched back of a cat" Wow! A wonderful vivid image of the snow. This is a powerful poem full of evocative winter imagery. Well done!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/5/2023 10:24:00 PM

Greetings Thomas Thanks very much for your affirmative message. Surprisingly, we had a December snowstorm but climate warming has obliterated all. I hope all is well with you as you pen your fine verses in 2023. With best wishes for good days, Brian