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Snowflakes

This is a Cornish Sonnet--Rhyme is AbacbcDedfefAD--(close rhyme) in Iambic Tetrameter---(Yes, it is a true sonnet form, there are at least 50ish) A million crystals made by God now float in space like finest lace; each one perfection - never flawed, unique in six-fold symmetry. They fall to earth in cold embrace where moonlight dances brilliantly. Reflecting back prismatic light like natures crystal chandelier; embellishing this winter night, then landing on your blushing cheek and melting there just like a tear. Still drifting with the night's mystique a million crystals made by God, reflecting back prismatic light.

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Date: 12/25/2017 1:00:00 PM
This is so beautiful Craig. I must put this beauty into my Faves! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:39:00 AM
This is lovely, Craig, and I love this style of Sonnet. I must have a dabble. Have a joyful Christmas. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/21/2017 12:54:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:09:00 PM
this is precisely beautifully said. I love the descriptions.
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Date: 12/20/2017 7:00:00 PM
a nice picture painted in my mind, not only from your poem but a memory...thank you for both
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