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Snowballs-Ws

snowballs compacted rolled up, stacked, frozen in place man’s jewels, a carrot and coal flurries cling to fur and shaken loose, tail wagging snowball’s freshly unfurling 1/9/2023 Winter Sedoka Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/5/2023 4:50:00 AM

Excellent sedoka with fantastic imagery my dear friend Kim. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2023 5:43:00 AM

Thank you, Len! Glad you enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:30:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:38:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:31:00 PM

Adorable, Kim!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Now we need some hot chocolate to warm it with. Doggy needs rubs. Have a great day..............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 8:22:00 PM

LOL…thanks :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 4:43:00 AM

Oops! Kim, I adored this poem. Unfortunately, you had one too many syllables in "Man's jewels, a carrot and coal" (8) Thanks for entering my contest...Congratulations on your placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 5:12:00 AM

You are right, Charles! I should have remembered that jewels has 3 syllables or put the poem through howmanysyllables! But thank you nonetheless for “adoring” it!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/18/2023 2:33:00 AM

Good luck in the contest, Kim. Well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 5:12:00 AM

Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 1/10/2023 8:12:00 PM

Beautiful images of winter. Lovely twin haikus, dear Kim. All the Best in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 5:12:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2023 1:36:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for the visits. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 1:42:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/9/2023 9:15:00 AM

Hmmm. My muse had me writing about snowballs last night too. An entirely diff context tho. This piece gave me quite an Aha! moment. It works its Images to equal an ineffable feeling. I am amazed and ready to go in for cocos. Who let the dog out in the first place? Hmmm, sally

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 9:22:00 AM

LOL…you have me chuckling!