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Snowball

Snowball Memories are the dreams of aging years warming hearts by their nostalgic glow tons of smiles, momentary tears all the good times we did know you view a vista bright bold open window call it hindsight life says, “No you can’t go.” 3/18/18 A MELTING SNOWBALL Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/18/2018 5:55:00 PM

Mental health says "Don't live in the past," but what would the aging do without their memories which they can now pick and choose. I like this poem.

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/19/2018 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite. Memories are sweet.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2018 4:40:00 PM

This is definitely a great example of a melting snowball, Sian! I understand that it's a diminishing of both letters and syllables. ~ Yes, memories are mostly a prerogative of aging years:) Regards // paul

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/19/2018 12:54:00 PM

I didn't know it was a diminishing of both at the same time. Maybe it need to revisit this which is really an etheree. Thanks for the comments. Always appreciated.