Small Beginnings

autumn winds persist woodland floor a rustic stage… act one an acorn © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Anil Deo

Date: 4/29/2020 12:48:00 AM

came for ACT 2, Sir HARRY ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2020 8:03:00 PM

yesssss, I love when you write like this!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2020 11:18:00 AM

So few words, such deep and thoughtful meaning. An excellent Haiku Harry, Stay safe my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/25/2020 10:24:00 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, the woodlands always have small beginnings to grow into greenery. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2020 7:00:00 AM

Great imagery succinctly conveyed, Harry

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 4/25/2020 6:27:00 AM

It takes a real mastery to make so few words convey such sensory depth. A great haiku, and a great work of art, Harry.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/25/2020 4:19:00 AM

I laughed upon encountering "an acorn," the final line, LINE #3. Shalom, shalom & welcome creativity for sharing after 12 days of silence (social distancing on Net)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/25/2020 4:16:00 AM

Love the rustic image of autumn Harry. Hope alls well Tom

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/24/2020 10:27:00 PM

Sweet haiku that reminds us of the promise of autumn

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/24/2020 9:41:00 PM

A song of fall, so stirring, harry-