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Slumber's Lullaby--A Pantoum

Our world at twilight is like silken lace imbued with a grandeur of a kismet , pressed by a mint breeze to warm an embrace awaiting votive candles to be set. Imbued with a grandeur of a kismet in tints of evening, in amber, and pine, awaiting votive candles to be set when hours lullaby the moon, we entwine. In tints of evening, in amber, and pine, and sweet murmurs unfurl these restful wings; when hours lullaby the moon, we entwine to cuddle gratitude that soft kiss brings. And sweet murmurs unfurl these restful wings pressed by a mint breeze to warm an embrace, to cuddle gratitude that soft kiss brings. Our world at twilight is like silken lace. ------------- For Eve Roper's Contest A Pantoum A Poet's Choice Contest 4/07/2016

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Date: 4/7/2016 1:45:00 PM
I adore your imaginative imagery in this top winner Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win! #7. ; )
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:54:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your word choice so gentle, such a wonderful Pantoum. This deserves the highest rating and it goes into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:54:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:19:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:54:00 AM
Great work nette.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, another fine win...
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Date: 4/4/2016 7:35:00 PM
Nette, thank you for creating a poem for my contest congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/4/2016 7:14:00 PM
Lovely write! Congrats!
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:50:00 PM
Oh nette, beautiful poem...really...congrats on your top placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/4/2016 4:31:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/2/2016 5:21:00 AM
Awesome images n wonderful poetry nette.. Gl in contest!
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:23:00 PM
I am awed by your language and absorbing images. Thank you!
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Date: 4/1/2016 6:32:00 PM
Your seamless, floating poetry enchants me!
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Date: 4/1/2016 6:23:00 PM
The imagery is so beautiful Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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