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Walking past each other and just by chance
My heart skips a beat and my knees turn weak
Your eyes lock with mine in a fleeting glance
In a ricochet of emotion I just cannot speak 

Our time cut short on that exotic island resort
Mutual attraction that grew, our emotions weren’t slow
But alas contact lost aft’ that last kiss at the port
Intimacy so fleeting - regrets of letting you go

We were star crossed lovers on that fateful day
I remember that last time when you held me so tight
Now per chance we meet thousands of miles away    
‘Neath the same blanket of stars and a moon like tonight ~ ~ 

* “As the midnight moon, was driftin’ through ~ The lazy sway of the trees ~ I saw the look in your eyes, lookin' into mine ~ I’m seeing what you wanted to see
Darlin' don't say a word, cause I already heard ~ What your body's sayin' to mine You’re tired of fast moves ~ You’ve got a slow groove ~ On your mind”

Swirling sparkling shades of colours that mix and smudge
It’s been so long but there’s no cause to rush
Run you lips on my neck feel our naked skins touch 
Nipples a tingling and a warm spreading flush

Your soft slow hand feels like flitting fireflies 
You whisper my name, I’m enchanted tonight
Soft moans of pleasure and my passionate sighs 
Play with me, sway with me and feel my delight ~ ~

* “You want a man with a slow hand ~ You want a lover with a easy touch
You want somebody who will spend some time ~ Not come and go with a heated rush  Baby believe me I’ll understand ~ When it comes to love, you want a slow hand”

My nerves aglow like the tips of optic fibres
Your touches trigger firework displays to ignite
Seeking and teasing my spot of torrid desires 
Impatiently craving our eminent fusion tonight 

Opening like a flower dripping with a dewy spritz
Ecstasy overflows with your slow hand in motion
Electrostatic sparks on my tongue, skin and lips
Sip my summer wine that’s the nectar of my passion ~ ~

* “Darlin', don't say a word, 'cause I already heard ~ What your body's sayin' to mine   If you want it all night ~ You know it's alright ~ I’ve got the time”

I tantalise your tumescent core with silken caresses 
Erotically teasing you with tiny feather like tickles
Like the soft waving flutter of butterflies winged kisses 
Thrilling sensory overload of silver waves and ripples

All else out of focus on a soft cloud of passion
Exquisite pleasure on the crest of a fire
No words that are needed or any explanation 
The endless waves of emotion that transpire ~ ~

* “You got a man with a slow hand ~ You got a lover with an easy touch
You got somebody who will spend some time ~ Not come and go in a heated rush Baby believe me I’ll understand ~ When it comes to love, you want a slow hand”

My hips arching high meeting your ardent thirst
Fill my ocean - savour my delight
Rhapsody of fluttering sensations - a volcanic burst 
Come with me - the world’s ours tonight 

Basking in the enchantment of an afterglow
An amorous haze of amber swirls and coral sand
With crystal clear waters and sparkling sand below
At long last I’ve found you in this island fairyland

Acknowledgement:
My appreciation to RP (the Reluctant Poet) for his creative input on a delicate sensual theme that we’ve all experienced sometime.

POTD 16 Aug 2017

* Lyric 'Slow Hand' Music and Video Clip Citation and Reference:
Video Clip and Lyrics 'Slow Hand' by Phantasm 2000AD Published on Nov 2, 2008 Elvis Returns Standard You Tube licence. 

All rights of the Lyrics, video and track belong to the original Copyright owners. The original Lyrics written by J. Warren Bettis, first released sung and released in May 1981 by the Pointer Sisters and subsequently sung by various artists including Elvis in the above clip.

Lyrics of the song in quotes and italics and referenced with and asterisk has been transcribed as a read to be followed with the song. It is not intended to be or claimed as part of the above poetry verses.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/31/2018 9:54:00 AM
The words seductive and steamy come to mind... PHEW! Talk later, going immediately for an ice cold shower!!! PHEW!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 11/5/2017 2:22:00 PM
Sway with me, feel my delight. Nice write Maria
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:11:00 AM
Lol! thank you Edward. So glad you could sway with it. I always appreciate your visits and nice comments...Maria
Date: 11/5/2017 1:49:00 PM
Maria just getting the chance to check out those poems you suggested ......and very nicely done my friend!Might I suggest from mine perhaps "Relax" "In Your Dreams" or even "Roller Coaster Of Love" just off the top of my head lol!
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:14:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, so glad you checked these ones out that I suggested. I will definitely be checking out yours too. Thanks for dropping by and commenting, much appreciated...Maria xxx
Date: 10/10/2017 8:24:00 AM
Wow. It's a nice loving piece, expresses sweet moment shared. Keep it up.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Derek, both for the visit and lovely comments...Maria
Date: 9/3/2017 7:26:00 AM
Seductive and sensual write Maria. A beautiful expression of emotions and desire.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much James, always appreciate your friendly visit and lovely comments....Maria
Date: 9/2/2017 4:03:00 PM
Sweet, very nice so well done, sparkling delights.
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Date: 10/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward both for the visit and lovely comments....Maria
Date: 8/23/2017 4:21:00 PM
Some kinda of erotic fireworks this poem blasts, Maria ... w/props to RP. A sizzling POTD congrats to you as well. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/23/2017 10:47:00 PM
Haha, glad you liked the fireworks my friend Freddie. Thanks so much for your lovely visit and comments, always appreciate them...Maria
Date: 8/22/2017 1:34:00 AM
Wow! Incredibly delicious, Maria! lol Loved it. Absolutely perfect and so is the music. I love Elvis. I used to live across the street from him in Memphis. I bet he would love this poem too. It's just so...exciting! And congrats on POTD too.
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Date: 8/22/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Carole for all the wonderful support you have showed me. My goodness how exciting would that have been living so close to the King-Wow!!So glad that you liked this, my imagination ran away a bit, I think lol
Date: 8/20/2017 4:32:00 AM
Hi Maria , have to open the windows it is getting hot in here great write my friend ;;;)))) hugs
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:31:00 PM
Or a cold shower might be better? Thanks for the visit Niall, I do appreciate it....Maria
Date: 8/19/2017 7:38:00 AM
It is good to see that true passion and romance can inspire such beautiful poetry, Maria. I too took my time to read these lines, savouring the contents at my own pace. Full marks to you and congrats (albeit belated) on the p.o.t.d. award. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. You know you are one of my favorite poets on this site, your incredible input and wonderful comments are something I have always looked out for and deeply appreciated. I will miss you ....Maria
Date: 8/18/2017 11:41:00 PM
Wow Maria! This poem could nestle nicely in one of those romantic novels! Big kudos on receiving POTD! Elvis's lyrics fit beautifully with your wonderfully written poem! : )
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, I really appreciate your lovely comments and visits as always. Yes I'll have to think seriously about those novels, thanks for the vote of confidence......Maria
Date: 8/18/2017 11:10:00 AM
This is absolutely enchanting and what a marvelous creation you've made here, dear friend. It gives a sweet taste of optimism and well being. Well done. Congrats for POTD. Regs Sunita
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunita, I always appreciate your visit and comments my friend......Maria
Date: 8/17/2017 6:56:00 AM
Maria, Congratulations on POTD!! What an extraordinary write -- both captivating and enchanting. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary, I really appreciate your visit and wonderful comments ....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:08:00 PM
Ohh Maria! Hot steamy romantic spicey stuff here! A beautifully written sensual poem well deserving of POTD honors! Congratulations!! :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I really appreciate your visit and generous comments. So glad that you enjoyed this 'steamy write'....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 6:38:00 PM
Very beautifully written! I could feel the love and romance as I read. Beautiful poem! Congrats on POTD! :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Julie, I really appreciate both your visit and comments, and so glad you liked it...Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 6:34:00 PM
Congrats!!!...(((POTD)))...another spectacular write Maria...keep them coming, my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much WW, I really appreciate your visits and generous comments as always my friend....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 5:59:00 PM
Nicely done romantic poem and rhyme, Maria,congratulations on POTD
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, both for your visit and generous comments, so glad that you liked it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 10:17:00 AM
Without any doubt I say this is a shining gem of romantic thoughts and lyrical verse. Definitely a fine and most deserving choice for POTD honors my friend.. Solid ten and now a gem that I fav..
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:29:00 AM
Robert you always bestow such praise and beautiful comments my friend, coming from such a wonderful poet like yourself I am deeply honoured. Thank you....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 9:34:00 AM
So much talent went into this. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite, both for your visit and generous comments, so glad that you liked it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:38:00 AM
Maria you blended thr lyric perfectly into your work, congratulations...
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie, I really appreciate both you visit and generous comments....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
Hi Maria, a wonderfully sensual write from your pen. I love just being able to let such words sing i to my mind, what pictures your words do paint on the canvas of my mind. A belated congratulations on POTD Maria. An excellent write. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike,so glad that you liked this. I really appreciate both your visit and generous comments my friend...Maria xxx
Date: 8/16/2017 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful sensual write Maria...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph, both for the visit and congrats, I really appreciate it...Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations my dearest friend Maria on your POTD!!! Over the moon this morning reading it again :) big hugs :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so much my dearest friend Akkina, Wow! I was pretty surprised getting POTD on this, but great for Elvis, the King lives again, thank you for coming back with the congrats, I appreciate it...Maria xx
Date: 8/16/2017 6:04:00 AM
Sensual poem, about desire for the beloved.. Goes nicely with the music..
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:56:00 AM
The desire was all for Elvis, and he inspired the poem, so great, the King lives again. Funny I never used to like him, but I do now, especially with this song, Thanks Si, both for the visit and comment, do appreciate it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 5:31:00 AM
Just a heads up song titles are allowed in your poems but not lyrics. It is copyright infringement. I've received a cease and desist order in the past and did a blog on the subject. I removed the poem to their suggestion.
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