Slipping

I feel it every day
 parts of me slipping away.
For a moment in passing
 all of me once seemed immortal and everlasting
but now, fading like storm-threatened gray clouds
 part of my mind slows through the oppressive crowds.
I dare not speak
 keeping my secret hidden and discrete
 while cautiously I direct my feet.
Stepping through the garden displays
 I marvel at the colors as they fray.
In nature bounty resurrected in spring
 I marvel at life as it begins to change everything.
In my heart, I'm still young and alive
 but in my remaining years, I'm forced to recognize
All of me is unseen, forgotten, and pushed aside
 time's up and needing of release unable to continue to hide
 and in the waning years of time, life and death collide.
I feel it every day
 pats of me slipping away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 1:25 PM
I agree w/Sunlite. I feel you on this one, DW, as I too am getting up in age. I relate totally w/your prescient words. Powerful poetry w/relevant meaning to many readers. Love always.
Wanter Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Very well expressed, DM. Me, too!
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