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Sleepwalking Ultimatium

Dear Mary for many years a roving painter, sadly now her memory has grown fainter. Her top echelon family struggled to find, someone to corral her wandering mind. After a letter was sent by best rest home. Please confine your mother to bed at night, Her neighbours have complained in fright. of white clad midnight door knocking, Yelling and banging on windows even more shocking. She must sleepwalk no more Or we have to show you the door! Written 29 July 2018 For Sleepwalking Poetry Contest by John Hamilton. (A true story)

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Date: 3/2/2020 1:33:00 PM
Poor soul ! Really, I totally agree she shouldn't sleep in a white nightgown anymore.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 6/26/2020 5:43:00 PM
hi Line, sorry havn't had time to poetry soup for awhile, life has gotten very interesting - thank you for continuing to think of me
Date: 8/1/2018 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and well done!
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/2/2018 4:50:00 AM
thanks susan
Date: 8/1/2018 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Virginia (I can relate, we had to put our mother in a nursing home partly because she would sleepwalk!)
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/2/2018 4:50:00 AM
yes, problems it creates and solutions must be found.
Date: 7/31/2018 9:54:00 AM
Congrats Virginia!
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Virginia Waters
Date: 7/31/2018 10:19:00 PM
thank you kind sir!

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