Sleepwalking Ultimatium

Dear Mary for many years a roving painter,
sadly now her memory has grown fainter.
Her top echelon family struggled to find,
someone to corral her wandering mind.
After a letter was sent  by best rest home.
Please confine your mother to bed at night,
Her neighbours have complained in fright.
of white clad midnight door knocking,
Yelling and banging on windows even more shocking.
She must sleepwalk no more
Or we have to show you the door!





Written 29 July 2018
For Sleepwalking Poetry Contest
by John Hamilton.
(A true story)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Poor soul ! Really, I totally agree she shouldn't sleep in a white nightgown anymore.
Waters Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 5:43 PM
hi Line, sorry havn't had time to poetry soup for awhile, life has gotten very interesting - thank you for continuing to think of me
Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and well done!
Waters Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:50 AM
thanks susan
Faulkner Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations, Virginia (I can relate, we had to put our mother in a nursing home partly because she would sleepwalk!)
Waters Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:50 AM
yes, problems it creates and solutions must be found.
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Congrats Virginia!
Waters Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 10:19 PM
thank you kind sir!
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