Sleepwalking, Or Not


I stirred and heard him crying in my sleep
and felt a thrill at that familiar sound.
My body up and on my feet, I walked
and at the back door, he was gladly found.

I scooped him up and held him in my arms,
so cold he was from the cold winter night. 
I warmed some milk, he lapped it hungrily...
then wrapped him in a shawl of blue and white.

Back down the hall, I went with him to bed
and must have fallen back to sleep a while.
Later, I woke and thought about my dream;
recalled it with a tear, half-hearted smile.

But oh, there was that shawl upon my bed,
milk saucer on the floor, back door ajar!
Was I sleepwalking? More than just a dream?
My Charlie cat, long gone...this was bizarre!

Why are his shawl and bowl within my sight?
He'd passed, September, many years ago.
I fully opened the back kitchen door...
and there I saw paw footprints in the snow.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Any July 2018 Poem
Sponsor: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
Judged: 08/09/2018

~2nd Place~
Contest: Sleepwalking
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 07/31/2018
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Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Fantastic and very moving verse, Sandra , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again! A great story told well.
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Sandra congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful and amazing write. As a cat lover who just lost a cat to heaven it touched me deeply!
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 2:56 PM
I am so pleased that you connected with my poem, Dear Heart. I know you still suffer the loss of your sweet furry friend, and I know that pain. Thank you so much for the contest and my fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Sandra, your beautifully moving poem reached in deep and truly touched my heart. Love never dies.. Congratulations on your excellent win my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you very much, Susan, for your kind, empathetic comments, and congratulations. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:34 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win for this touching story. John
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you so much, John! Much appreciated. Sandra
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Heartwarming storytelling, Sandra. Well-deserving of a first-place finish! Best wishes, Gershon
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great story,! Very creative.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thanks, Susan! I appreciate your congrats and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Carber Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:30 AM
I like the 'twist'-- and why shouldn't our pets who've passed re-visit us at least in our dreams--congrats, Sanda
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you, L.J. for your visit, congrats, and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:33 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. Nicely told story in flowing words.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal, for your congrats and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:31 AM
A great story Sandra, very compelling write, and worthy of a second place win!
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thanks for the nice contest, John, and for my nice placement. Sandra
Barden Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 11:00 AM
This is so lovely, heart-wrenching and mysterious, Sandra, and I just love it! I will share a similar story with you sometime, (or perhaps write a poem?), about my Cosby, a big stray tomcat who adopted me many years ago, who passed about seven years ago, yet made a spiritual visit to me. Your writing never disappoints, my friend, and this has to be a fav. Blessings, and keep up the wonderful work! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you very much, Greg, for the visit and lovely, supportive comments. I appreciate it so much. I'd love to hear about your Cosby's spiritual visit! Sandra :)
Blown Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:17 PM
excellent!
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much! Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 3:34 PM
This is a lovely write! A fave, Sandra! GL!
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 2:51 PM
A spooky one Sandra, well written. Tom
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Thank you so much, Tom! Sandra
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