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he gets up late at night puts his slippers on and walks around I’m never sure if he’s asleep or just faking it he goes directly to the fridge with his eyes half closed and slightly mumbling just creepy enough for me not to want to interfere he always goes right for that left-over piece of cake and pours himself a glass of milk it happens every Sunday night I’m beginning to be just a little suspicious… Submitted on June 12, 2020 for contest SLEEPLESS - OLD OR NEW sponsored by CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE - RANKED 3RD and July 17, 2018 for contest SLEEPWALKING sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 6/18/2020 8:52:00 AM
A million congratulations and thanks for a well written poem with the beauty of simplicity for everybody to read and enjoy!
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Date: 6/18/2020 3:29:00 PM
Much appreciated, Frances ~
Date: 6/17/2020 3:08:00 AM
This is brilliantly amusing Line! Clever and witty :D I am sure you are right to doubt if he is faking it. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2020 8:15:00 PM
Very nicely penned Line, Congrats on your win...
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Date: 6/16/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2020 2:05:00 PM
Enjoyed the humour Line, many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2020 1:43:00 PM
He's faking it, Line. It's all a ruse just to get that last piece of cake. Enjoyed the humor very much. Congrats on your place in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2020 7:03:00 PM
You sound pretty sure of that, Carolyn ~ lol Thank you!
Date: 8/1/2018 7:04:00 PM
Lol! Creative and cute. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:07:00 PM
Thanks, Susan, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 8/1/2018 8:28:00 AM
Kinda cool, Line, kinda cool! Congrats!
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, LJ.
Date: 8/1/2018 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Enjoyable read.
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Date: 8/1/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Subimal.
Date: 7/31/2018 9:47:00 PM
Congrats Line to win on the lovely poem. Hugs
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Anisha.
Date: 7/31/2018 6:06:00 PM
Lol...Congrats on your win Line
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Joseph.
Date: 7/31/2018 4:39:00 PM
Ha Ha, Line! Sounds suspicious to me too! Love it! Congratulations on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/31/2018 9:33:00 AM
This one was so funny and well written had to be rewarded, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 7/31/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/17/2018 6:09:00 PM
lol, I would too. Nice one Line.
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Date: 7/17/2018 9:28:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie.
Date: 7/17/2018 5:45:00 PM
That's SO humorous. I had such a vivid picture of the ' suspicious somnambulist!' Thank you!
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Date: 7/17/2018 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, for your lovely visit and comment.

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