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Sleeping Child (Eap:)

She tiptoes to his bed to peek: In the room so sweet, no words could speak As the child she loves so soundly sleeps And the moon beyond the window creeps With the moonlight kissing baby cheeks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/3/2010 7:18:00 AM
A cutie poem from you! Good rhyming in it! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:39:00 AM
So smooth & lovely. The feel of the poem reflects the sentiment. Beautiful read. Thank you, Matt. <3
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:21:00 AM
this would do well for a children's book of verses :) could see a picture that could do well with this :) lovely write!
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:40:00 AM
Miss Carrie, a very good job in a minor key. Solid. Thank you, as always, yo are very kind and affable. I appreciate it! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:53:00 AM
This poem is a tribute for your love of this child. Written from your soul. I wish you success in the contest. And thanks from the bottom of my heart, for your kind comment on my poem, It's Very Simple Really, a poem about writing. God Bless.
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:05:00 AM
Carrie ,thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:00:00 AM
so cute!! I am still trying to come up with a poem for this contest. Good luck. sounds like a winner!!
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:52:00 AM
Great picture , you painted here , Carrie and is already a winner ..... zzzzzz ..
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:20:00 AM
Yet this poem speaks vollumes. Very touching and endearing, Carrie. Love,lainie
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