Sleep

Sleep, like snow, you fall on me and deeply I go under. Sweet Slumber, smother me with pearly flakes; then change into your pitch black cloak. Embrace me like a lover; pleasure me with dreams while you suck from me the day’s realities. Dawn comes. My dark caller flees. Quick, to your casket speed! I can trust you’ll return to wrap me in oblivion. I’ll wait for after dusk when you will softly creep and deeply bury me. Come first, sweet Sleep, and fall on me like snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/10/2020 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful poem and shape. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............
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Date: 4/9/2020 5:20:00 PM
Such a dramatically descriptive, AWESOME poem. CONGRATS on your big win, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 4/9/2020 1:18:00 AM
Personally, I have a hard time falling asleep when covered by snow. It's cold, then it melts making my pajamas all wet. I'm just horsing around... congrats on the numero uno win for another AWESOME write!
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Date: 9/7/2012 9:20:00 AM
this is so tempting, you are are a very sensuous lady, a pen driven, by sheer joy.
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:09:00 AM
of course, congrats... where you at Andrea? How are you? stopping by to say good morning,, and read a poem or two... p.d.
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:55:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Andrea. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:07:00 PM
Great win Andrea, love this poem xx
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:40:00 PM
Wow, I love the thought of sleep being like snow..congrats on another fine poem being a winner. BG
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congrats (once again) on a win in a contest ......well deserved........George
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful lines here Andrea.Congrats on your well deserved 2nd place win with this very creative write.Loved it .huggs gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:50:00 AM
This is a gem from you Andrea.Congrats on your 2nd place win---kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:41:00 AM
beautiful Andrea, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:37:00 AM
Truly an awesome and original poem, Andrea. Must have missed it while I was away. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:24:00 AM
Love this one - many congrats, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/28/2011 5:48:00 AM
Sweet sleep indeed Andy. Great one. Warm congratulations for this win.
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:38:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your super second place in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry my friend.. always a joy to read your lines luv.. enjoy your top spot...win with luv..
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:58:00 PM
Totally loved this the first time I read this, love it still- super congrats on your awesome win sweetie! & yes I sure am glad that I was able to write that & btw I read your comments about my comments on your acrostic, I was just speaking the truth ;) -- mmm now I want to sleep again :D hugs to you!
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:46:00 PM
Very nice job.
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:40:00 PM
Congratulation Andrea on first Second. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:45:00 PM
thank you for commenting on Brandon my Grandson.
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:36:00 AM
Really nice Andrea, yours could be about sleep or dusk. Loved the assonance/internal rhyme, not to mention the lovely imagery that I could indeed almost feel ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:30:00 AM
A wonderful write Andrea. Yes, sleep is one thing I love to do. I marvel at some of the night hawks who get by on so little sleep. Good luck on Nette's contest. love phyl
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:02:00 PM
oh this sounds so blissful, Andrea! I could just sink myself in this-- no wonder at all how you did so well with this-- just love this through & through-- so many wonderful & memorable lines here-- :) hugs to you- now I want to sleep :D
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:28:00 PM
A very well crafted piece of poetry. This the best I've read so far on this site. I would like tio share two pieces with you. "To where a snowflake dies and I saw a snowflake in June".
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