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Skeleton Tree

in full bloom--- a skeleton tree at night with hanging stars ************************ By:kash poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 7:41:00 PM
Spectacular image - the hanging stars. Wonderful.
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Date: 7/7/2012 6:39:00 PM
Clever imagery! Enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for your well wishes regarding my poem. - Gail
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Date: 7/7/2012 2:08:00 PM
Super imagery, word use and cadence. Well done, Kash! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/7/2012 12:09:00 PM
Hi Kash, yes I had surgery on Thursday, but I am recovering pretty well now. Have a check up this week..
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Date: 7/7/2012 12:05:00 PM
A stunning image Kash :)
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:31:00 AM
I was looking around for entries for this very cool contest...altho I didn't get an entry in it, I was very impressed with fellow poets take on the theme...Yours is outstanding as I can visualize the stars dangling from its spindly branches! Great write once again, Kash...Hey, update on Gabby. She is home from hospital and back to her job...She is one strong courageous young gal who makes me so proud! She read everyone's sincere comments and thanks you!! 110 degrees heat index here in Ohio,,,,,ugh! Feeling the pain!!!! gwendolen
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Date: 7/6/2012 3:44:00 PM
A beautiful picture painted masterfully! Thank you for your wonderful comments! Good luck! Tanya
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Date: 7/6/2012 5:28:00 AM
Great haiku, Kash! Love the branches blooming with stars - Tim
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Date: 7/6/2012 2:03:00 AM
*wink*.. how art thou, today??..:)
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Date: 7/5/2012 10:30:00 AM
hey bud, want more!!... have a greeat day! :) huggs!
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:59:00 AM
Kashinath, I had to google stuff too. I know nothing of constellations or stars and I think my poem reflects that, haha
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Date: 7/5/2012 2:52:00 AM
I do love Haiku's ;}
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Date: 7/4/2012 2:48:00 PM
Oh!...Sure to be a winner..Enjoyed being delighted by this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/4/2012 10:27:00 AM
about to sign off, wishing you well, kashi bud!...:) hugggs and come visit!
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Date: 7/3/2012 9:34:00 PM
Very imaginative write. We can't see stars hanging from the branches during the daytime.
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Date: 7/3/2012 8:59:00 PM
Love the contrast of a skeletal tree being in full bloom. LOVELY
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Date: 7/3/2012 12:34:00 PM
the visual is beyond amazing, kashi... so true to 'ku form, i'm under the spell of your stars!.. winning choice!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/3/2012 12:24:00 PM
I really like your approach to this contest! The hanging stars are just beautiful! What a grandiose poem Kash! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/3/2012 9:48:00 AM
kash now this reads like an outright winner, excellent, good luck..David
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