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Skein of Montrose Basin

Flying wedge-like
as wool feathers the wind,
the geese are leaving the basin.

Where do they go?
How long till they arrive?
Will the plump make stops on the way?

At first a few
will arise together.
Later thousands flock to the sky.

Who leads the skein
and rides the windy tides
to the land of their winter dreams?

If I could fly,
wings soaring up with them,
I’d write poems with my pink feet.

And send all my pals a post card: “Wish you were here!”
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Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 5:09 PM
Wow! I love this a lot, very lovely inspiring and sweet. Thanks for sharing my dear friend Linda. Congratulations on your win! God bless. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Many thanks Len. It's good to see you here my friend. :) hugs and blessings. Linda
Anaya Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention! You did great Linda; Julia Ward is a discerning taskmaster!
Fowler Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Anaya :)
Miller Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Very clever, congratulations
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Terry. A bit of whimsy. I enjoyed your 'A Murder' immensely. I found it eerie and dark with loads of imagery. A unique write. Linda
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Terry. A bit of whimsy. I enjoyed your 'A Murder' immensely. I found it eerie and dark with loads of imagery. A unique write. Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Fourth verse is my favorite. I like the format and the pic too! Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Kim. laf
Ward Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Clever! Congratulations, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Julia. I am pleased with my placement in your contest. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:06 PM
Geese usually have a leader and fly in a v formation. Loved the ending. It would be wonderful to fly with a chevron of geese.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Thank you dear Victor. I hope your day is going well. :) Linda
Radice Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 1:50 AM
Excellent Linda. I learnt a new word today: 'skein'. I particularly love your fourth stanza. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Hello Gary. Many thanks for stopping by and commenting today :) Linda
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