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Flying wedge-like as wool feathers the wind, the geese are leaving the basin. Where do they go? How long till they arrive? Will the plump make stops on the way? At first a few will arise together. Later thousands flock to the sky. Who leads the skein and rides the windy tides to the land of their winter dreams? If I could fly, wings soaring up with them, I’d write poems with my pink feet. And send all my pals a post card: “Wish you were here!”

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Date: 10/10/2022 5:09:00 PM
Wow! I love this a lot, very lovely inspiring and sweet. Thanks for sharing my dear friend Linda. Congratulations on your win! God bless. Hugs
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/10/2022 6:16:00 PM
Many thanks Len. It's good to see you here my friend. :) hugs and blessings. Linda
Date: 10/9/2022 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention! You did great Linda; Julia Ward is a discerning taskmaster!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/9/2022 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Anaya :)
Date: 10/6/2022 11:40:00 PM
Very clever, congratulations
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/7/2022 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Terry. A bit of whimsy. I enjoyed your 'A Murder' immensely. I found it eerie and dark with loads of imagery. A unique write. Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/7/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Terry. A bit of whimsy. I enjoyed your 'A Murder' immensely. I found it eerie and dark with loads of imagery. A unique write. Linda
Date: 10/6/2022 1:03:00 PM
Fourth verse is my favorite. I like the format and the pic too! Congratulations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/6/2022 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Kim. laf
Date: 10/6/2022 11:14:00 AM
Clever! Congratulations, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/6/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Julia. I am pleased with my placement in your contest. :) Linda
Date: 10/1/2022 12:06:00 PM
Geese usually have a leader and fly in a v formation. Loved the ending. It would be wonderful to fly with a chevron of geese.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/1/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thank you dear Victor. I hope your day is going well. :) Linda
Date: 10/1/2022 1:50:00 AM
Excellent Linda. I learnt a new word today: 'skein'. I particularly love your fourth stanza. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/1/2022 7:40:00 AM
Hello Gary. Many thanks for stopping by and commenting today :) Linda

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