Written, February 17, 2025 Entered in the Contest, "Plantery Poetry Contest," March 18, 2026 Sponsor: William Kelii Kekaula
Saturn's rings mystify me indeed! All seem bound with no purpose or need. Spinning boulders and ice- pictures of them add spice. In the end, where will good answers lead? But last night I woke up from strange dreams; found I landed by way of moonbeams! To my greatest surprise right in front of my eyes- Large space monsters fast led to my screams! The group traveled on magical skates fixed beneath monster dumpsters with grates- which then opened to spread the trapped boulders instead of their roaming around with bad fates. They sprawled tons of old space-filled debris, and I gathered from what I could see, kept those rings plumped up well; captured for a long spell eased collisions in our Galaxy! Now, I know that these facts aren't true cause that's not how those circles accrue! Magnetism makes rings, space debris spins, and clings! So, this theme earned my fun poet's view!
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