Sixty Minutes

Sixty minutes to make peace, 
not much time in the scheme of things.  
To ask forgiveness for all I've done, 
seems I shouldn't have tempted fate in the first place.  
I never should have taken the path, 
that leads to remorse and I'm sorry's.  
I just should have listened to my little voice.  
The Angel that tried to guide me.  
Perhaps I wouldn't be here at this moment, facing my mortality.  
The what if's can fry the mind. 
 But just one might have saved me.  
I leaned upon the tale I'd been told, 
that forgiveness is but a prayer away. 
But, when you have just thirty minutes left, 
you realize it's too late.  
I am luckier than some, I guess.  
That had the end happen in a blink.  
Never knowing, nor having the chance, 
to ask for their soul to be saved.  
With just thirty seconds, 
not much time for lengthy pleas.  
So I will just ask you to hear my last two words..
"Forgive me" 



For the contest:  MY Last Hour
Sponsored by Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Warden Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Soup mail...
Onclaud Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 9:41 PM
stirringmy soul, paula.. love the way this ended.. is this free verse and prose poetry?? love it with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Wonderful poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Take care. Dana'lynn
Roberts Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM
soup mail
Warden Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 3:13 PM
Paula,again this is good. The words hit home..hugs to you..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace