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Sister Seasons

Summer: Sunshine-blonde with sapphire eyes, Cheeks tinged pink by bold sunrise. She smiles at noon to light the sky, Nudging clouds with gentle sighs. She wears a gown of mossy lace With blooming buttons, neatly spaced. With ocean heart and river veins, She seldom cries - she dislikes rain. Autumn: Fire-red locks with rose gold eyes Bright with flecks of fireflies. She pulls a veil of thunder clouds Across the sky - a purple shroud. She wears a robe of flaming beads, A golden crown of rainbow leaves. With full moon heart and molten veins, She weeps at will - she enjoys rain. Winter: Raven mane with silver eyes, Soft skin pale as milky skies. She exhales gusts of icy wind; Her breath leaves frost on everything. She wears a cloak of northern lights With sunburst jewels carved from ice. With clouded heart and frozen veins, She cannot cry - she freezes rain. Spring: Amber curls with emerald eyes - A fickle pair that floods and dries. She melts away the ice and snow And resurrects the sun's warm glow. She wears a cape of tangled stems, Of gauzy vines and rosebud gems. With honey heart and nectar veins, She loves to cry - she lives for rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/13/2012 6:20:00 PM
What a fine write I told you it was wonderful ;) congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Heather. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 8:12:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Heather! An amazing write which I greatly enjoyed! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/13/2012 2:56:00 AM
Heather congrats on your win, I loved this first time around...David
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Heather love xx
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:05:00 PM
Great poem Heather, definitely readagainable.....Seren
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Date: 12/12/2012 6:53:00 PM
You have given each season a life of its own, and we can watch them with joy!! Lovely poem!! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:52:00 AM
wondeful contest entry Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2012 5:49:00 AM
This poem takes my breath away Heather...perfect flow...flawless rhythm and meter...love the last lines of each verse - Tim
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Date: 12/6/2012 10:00:00 PM
Heather, that poem you commented to, yes, it is for the personification contest!
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Date: 12/6/2012 5:39:00 PM
You might have exhausted yourself writing this one, so descriptive and full of images. Great work. Good luck. Thnx for visiting!! Jag
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Date: 12/6/2012 5:15:00 AM
Heather they are all very descriptive, my favourite is Spring, very well done..David
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Date: 12/5/2012 4:40:00 PM
I LOVE this. it's the perfect example of personification. You seem to take my point of view in other things. For example, if I were writing of the seasons, I too would portray them much this way and with the hair colors you describe above. This is a WINNER. I am sure.
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