Sister Seasons

Summer:
Sunshine-blonde with sapphire eyes,
Cheeks tinged pink by bold sunrise.  
She smiles at noon to light the sky, 
Nudging clouds with gentle sighs.
She wears a gown of mossy lace
With blooming buttons, neatly spaced.   
With ocean heart and river veins,
She seldom cries - she dislikes rain.  
 
Autumn:
Fire-red locks with rose gold eyes
Bright with flecks of fireflies.
She pulls a veil of thunder clouds
Across the sky - a purple shroud.
She wears a robe of flaming beads,
A golden crown of rainbow leaves.
With full moon heart and molten veins,   
She weeps at will - she enjoys rain. 
 
Winter:
Raven mane with silver eyes,
Soft skin pale as milky skies.
She exhales gusts of icy wind;  
Her breath leaves frost on everything.  
She wears a cloak of northern lights
With sunburst jewels carved from ice. 
With clouded heart and frozen veins,
She cannot cry - she freezes rain.
 
Spring:
Amber curls with emerald eyes -
A fickle pair that floods and dries. 
She melts away the ice and snow
And resurrects the sun's warm glow.
She wears a cape of tangled stems,
Of gauzy vines and rosebud gems.  
With honey heart and nectar veins,
She loves to cry - she lives for rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:20 PM
What a fine write I told you it was wonderful ;) congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Heather. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Heather! An amazing write which I greatly enjoyed! love and hugs, Leonora
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 2:56 AM
Heather congrats on your win, I loved this first time around...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Heather love xx
Roberts Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Great poem Heather, definitely readagainable.....Seren
Richards Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 6:53 PM
You have given each season a life of its own, and we can watch them with joy!! Lovely poem!! Congratulations!
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:52 AM
wondeful contest entry Light & Love
Ryerson Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 5:49 AM
This poem takes my breath away Heather...perfect flow...flawless rhythm and meter...love the last lines of each verse - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 10:00 PM
Heather, that poem you commented to, yes, it is for the personification contest!
Nair Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 5:39 PM
You might have exhausted yourself writing this one, so descriptive and full of images. Great work. Good luck. Thnx for visiting!! Jag
Williams Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 5:15 AM
Heather they are all very descriptive, my favourite is Spring, very well done..David
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 4:40 PM
I LOVE this. it's the perfect example of personification. You seem to take my point of view in other things. For example, if I were writing of the seasons, I too would portray them much this way and with the hair colors you describe above. This is a WINNER. I am sure.
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