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Since the Dawn Of

Winters flows recede
Unknown depths reveal the past
Strata shows time lines











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February 16, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Creative view captured in just three lines. Keep on writing my friend. Enjoyed this one. Karen

Skat A

February 3, 2011 at 11:13 PM

HELLO, JAMES CAN YOU PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TITLE.. TO MY FLAWED CONTEST.. I ALREADY PLACED IT.. I WOULD HATE TO REMOVE IT... BECAUSE IT WOULD NOT BE FAIR... TAKE CARE.. IRMA

Deb Radke

February 3, 2011 at 2:26 PM

Oh, very nice, James. I love the second line, and the idea of hidden pasts underneath the depths being exposed by the melting of winter. Great write. Love, Deb

February 2, 2011 at 5:18 PM

Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2011 at 11:02 AM

A new favorite for me, James! You know I read archaeology books and am always fascinated by the "time lines" shown by the strata when previously submerged areas surface. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 29, 2011 at 11:35 AM

so much said in these three lines-- very unique thoughts as well-- loved that last line of yours, James and it could be me but maybe it is "of" there for your title? eep sorry I missed your birthday-- so belated happy birthday :D Wishing you all the best :) -- nikko :)