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Winters flows recede Unknown depths reveal the past Strata shows time lines http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-13.p

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/3/2011 11:13:00 PM
HELLO, JAMES CAN YOU PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TITLE.. TO MY FLAWED CONTEST.. I ALREADY PLACED IT.. I WOULD HATE TO REMOVE IT... BECAUSE IT WOULD NOT BE FAIR... TAKE CARE.. IRMA
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Date: 2/3/2011 2:26:00 PM
Oh, very nice, James. I love the second line, and the idea of hidden pasts underneath the depths being exposed by the melting of winter. Great write. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/30/2011 11:02:00 AM
A new favorite for me, James! You know I read archaeology books and am always fascinated by the "time lines" shown by the strata when previously submerged areas surface. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:35:00 AM
so much said in these three lines-- very unique thoughts as well-- loved that last line of yours, James and it could be me but maybe it is "of" there for your title? eep sorry I missed your birthday-- so belated happy birthday :D Wishing you all the best :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:40:00 PM
Wow James, clear image.
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Date: 1/28/2011 6:55:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my blog today, and I love your haiku written in the traditional way, just lovely~~
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Date: 1/28/2011 5:01:00 PM
Thank you all, sometimes when I come in from my thoughts, I realise....:)
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Date: 1/28/2011 4:55:00 PM
Quite qualitative write, James
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:38:00 PM
So much history in those many ines of strata, James. Good one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:20:00 PM
This is about as well as anyone can write a quality haiku. Great descriptiveness in so few words.
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:19:00 PM
This is real good!!! Very nice my friend... say it all in a few wonderful lines...always Michael
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:08:00 PM
Nice!!! Christine
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