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I walk lonely in the garden of my dead mother, down paths frozen with song birds in trees; my coat is of mourning black, my heart is shattered- Filigree snowflakes, fall . . . ________________________________ March 17, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Filigree Snowflakes Fall Copyright Protected, ID 18-1004-571-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, A Melting Snowball Sponsor Line Gauthier ( Snowball Poetry ) Third Place Used descending words 10, 8 6, 4, 2, 1

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Date: 4/19/2018 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sad write full of imagery.
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win with such a melancholic poem.
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win< Broken Wings.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:06:00 PM
- Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:14:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:38:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this lovely emotive poem, BW.
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:52:00 AM
Having been closer to my mother after quitting work to care for her before she died, I can feel your pain, Constance. A lovely write. Viv x
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:17:00 AM
Vic thank you for the nice comment. This is a pain that never will fade
Date: 3/17/2018 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful melancholy expressed in your poignant and heartfelt imagery Broken Wings.. Moving and tender.. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
Susan thank you for the beautiful and the nice comment
Date: 3/17/2018 11:55:00 AM
aww Constance this is so beautiful and has your trademark melancholy style. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2018 12:11:00 PM
Jan, thank you for your words. You know how my heart is forever shattered.

Book: Shattered Sighs