Constance La France Poet Verse

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Filigree Snowflakes Fall

I walk lonely in the garden of my dead mother,
down paths frozen with song birds in trees;
my coat is of mourning black, 
my heart is shattered- 
Filigree snowflakes,
fall . . . 


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March 17, 2018


Poetry/Verse/Filigree Snowflakes Fall
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1004-571-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, A Melting Snowball
Sponsor Line Gauthier ( Snowball  Poetry )

Third Place

Used descending words 10, 8  6, 4, 2, 1

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Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on your win with this sad write full of imagery.

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:52 AM Congratulations, Constance on your win with such a melancholic poem.

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 8:04 PM Congratulations on your win< Broken Wings.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:06 PM - Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 11:14 AM Dropping back with my congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:38 AM Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this lovely emotive poem, BW.

Viv Wigley March 18, 2018 at 2:52 AM Having been closer to my mother after quitting work to care for her before she died, I can feel your pain, Constance. A lovely write. Viv x Constance La France March 18, 2018 at 10:17 AM Vic thank you for the nice comment. This is a pain that never will fade

Susan Ashley March 17, 2018 at 1:50 PM Beautiful melancholy expressed in your poignant and heartfelt imagery Broken Wings.. Moving and tender.. Best wishes for a win! Constance La France March 18, 2018 at 10:16 AM Susan thank you for the beautiful and the nice comment

Jan Allison March 17, 2018 at 11:55 AM aww Constance this is so beautiful and has your trademark melancholy style. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Constance La France March 17, 2018 at 12:11 PM Jan, thank you for your words. You know how my heart is forever shattered.