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ducks g l i d i n g on a pond a weeping willow tree touching the blue a park of green and benches in rows a blue sky above white clouds f l o a t i n g by tadpoles swimming at the edge why do I remember this . . . after all these years with tears as I stood a little girl holding father's hand ____________________________ February 25, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/Simple Mutterings/A Memory Copyright Protected, ID 18-9982-09-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 2/28/2018 12:30:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery and delightful theme ... adore this one, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:34:00 AM
Greg, thank you for the gorgeous and the compliment ~
Date: 2/26/2018 10:32:00 AM
Love the vivid imagery in your writing - I find a fascinating aura of awe surrounding your work. Jesse
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:35:00 AM
Jessi, thank you for the nice comment ~
Date: 2/26/2018 7:55:00 AM
aww how sweet! There's nothing like your daddy...lovely poem sweet lady :)-luloo
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:35:00 AM
Laura, thank you for the nice comment ~
Date: 2/25/2018 10:26:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
Ravi, thank you for the excellent ~
Date: 2/25/2018 1:41:00 PM
A lovely verse BW ,how a place ,music or smell can make those happy memories surface. Tom
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
Tom, thank you for the lovely ~
Date: 2/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
So beautiful! Images stick in our minds like frozen paintings!
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the beautiful ~
Date: 2/25/2018 11:52:00 AM
Awww... what a beautiful memory is painted here with such vivid color. Great write, Constance.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:37:00 AM
Rhoda, thank you for the visit and the compliment ~
Date: 2/25/2018 11:46:00 AM
Aww such wonderful vivid memories Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:38:00 AM
Jan, thank you for the wonderful and the hugs ~
Date: 2/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
Very nice BW. I felt like I was there seeing it. Well written :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:38:00 AM
Heidi, thank you for visiting and for the compliment ~

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