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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ cosmic dancers swirl silver sequins in the night guiding us through life

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/16/2024 5:16:00 PM

Cosmic dancers swirl. Love this haiku, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/17/2024 6:08:00 AM

thanks, Jerry...enjoy your weekend, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/16/2024 4:21:00 PM

Lovely poetic thoughts of the cosmos, Sara. Your insights are comforting and pleasing to read. Big hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/17/2024 6:58:00 AM

thanks my loving and supportive hubby...big hugs back, me

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/16/2024 11:59:00 AM

Stars are like a map and their rotation is like a dance, Lovely poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:59:00 PM

those are some poetic words, Victor! I like them...and appreciate you sharing them. Thanks for visiting; have a splendid evening, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/16/2024 9:24:00 AM

Dear Sara, Your haiku is like a tiny, glittering treasure chest - small but mysterious. Your images are captivating, instantly transporting us to a vast, starry stage where celestial beings pirouette in their shimmering garments. You've created a profound and evocative image in just three lines, blending beauty, mystery, and hope. Always a pleasure to read your poems! - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:59:00 PM

wow, Daniel, your comments and insights were uplifting and a delight to read. You take such time in writing comments to everyone here on PS...always with kindness, depth, and wisdom. Thank you for stopping by. Grateful you enjoy my poems. Have a splendid weekend, Sara

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2024 8:48:00 AM

"Cosmic dancers swirling ", Very nice Haiku Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:57:00 PM

thank you, Joseph! Grateful for your positive words...have a pleasant evening, Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/16/2024 8:41:00 AM

So lovely Sara, ‘silver sequins in the night’ a beautiful Haiku… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:57:00 PM

thank you, Beryl! I'm grateful for your visit and kind words. Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2024 8:38:00 AM

- A beautiful dance, Sara ... excellent haiku :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:56:00 PM

thanks, Anne-Lise, for your visit and positive comments. Have a wonderful weekend, hugs, Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/16/2024 8:37:00 AM

Your three lined poem is absolutely amazing and you are such a fantastic poet friend to have on soup, never leaving anyone out, always a kind comment to all. Blessings and hugs to you Sara .. Jennifer

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:56:00 PM

you are most kind, Jennifer! Thanks for your positive comments about my poem and about my presence on Poetry Soup. Your words mean a great deal to me, Jennifer! Humbly grateful. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/16/2024 6:46:00 AM

Yes, like sequins on a black dress. I love this clever poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:55:00 PM

oh, I loved 'sequins on a black dress!' Well said. Appreciate your visit and glad you liked my poem. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 2/16/2024 6:13:00 AM

Sometimes I think of stars as snowflakes that God allows a longer life. Both beautiful and both eventually fall from The sky. An excellent image in fine Haiku form, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 3:54:00 PM

I like how you think of stars...that's beautiful! Thanks for your mindful and positive comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/16/2024 4:02:00 AM

Dear Sara poetess, What a lovely haiku you have crafted here with such a powerful spiritual message. Enjoyed and have a blessed day..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 5:15:00 AM

thank you for stopping by, Nancy. I much appreciate your kind and positive comments. Blessings, Sara