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Silver Strands

SILVER STRANDS We left the dusty strands of Santander * And struck west, seeking Peru, the far shining land, Our carracks riding high in the water, Hungry to ground our boats on its silver strand. Pack mules groaned under their silver load, Barges of silver threaded the palmed rivers, manned By dusky Inca slaves on their road Down to Peru’s glistening silver strand. Dipping in the warm sea up to our rails, The holds cracking open with chest and cask Of gleaming Spanish reales, the creaking sails * Pulling carracks full-laden for the task, We slipped out of sight of New Spain And its mines of silver, that silver land, Glinting hills, glittering cities, far over the Main, * And said adieu to its coasts and silver strands; Struck out for Santander, and unfurled Tall curtained palaces in Aragon and Castile - grand * And reaching to the sky from the New World - That far horizon with its silver strands. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. NOTES *Santander is a big port in Spain *Spanish money of the period was counted in REALES and was used everywhere as currency and as a reserve store of wealth, like the US dollar today. In the sixteenth century over 300 tons of silver each year were brought to Spain in fleets of ships from America. *The Atlantic Ocean was commonly called the (Spanish) Main. *Castile and Aragon were the two main kingdoms of Iberia which united and became “Spain”. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . Written for, and entered in, Susan Burch’s Contest “ Silver Strands”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/13/2011 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sidney. Kim
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Date: 12/12/2011 12:02:00 PM
Sydney congrats on your win.Very nice poem.
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:01:00 AM
Wonderful way to learn history. Congratulations on your win. Well earned.
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:57:00 AM
OKies now I am perfectly content lol to be last in this SILVER contest..this is a first place write if i ever saw one! Geeez we should go back to baby-talk Syd! LOL anyone I love ya. Congrad's [You beat me out!] Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2011 11:38:00 PM
This is not only good but interesting. Congratulations Sidney
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:21:00 PM
Sydney, I LOVE the quality writing in this poem. It was one of my favorites in the contest. Very elegant in its depiction of history. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2011 5:21:00 PM
Sydney, I really enjoyed this well written poem filled with intrigue and history. I am partial to silver and not many know it was valued higher than gold in Acient Egypt. Congratulations on your wonderful win and I too would have rated higher. It certainly far outshines my little etheree.
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Date: 12/11/2011 3:12:00 PM
I would rate this at the top. Nice history and geography. Well writen quatrain. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:16:00 PM
Both a beautiful poem and a lesson to boot. Very nice Sidney. Congratulations
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:03:00 PM
Sidney congrats on your win, sounds like an incredible journey..David
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:26:00 PM
Sidney, this is beautifully crafted. Susan is adding her scores to mine and posting the results in a day or two. I hope to see you on our list! Your writing is flawless.
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