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Silly Sausage

Silly Sally scoffed six succulent spicy sausages
Six succulent spicy sausages silly Sally scoffed
Silly Sally succumbed to sickness! 

11~16~16

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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November 26, 2016 at 9:36 AM

You sure essed me to death on this one. I will have to look into this form of poem. All the same beginning letters. That will take some brainwork. Am I up to it? We will see!

November 26, 2016 at 1:15 PM

the style is called alliteration Janet:-) give it a go its great fun:-) hugs Jan xx

November 20, 2016 at 5:35 PM

Hahahahahaha, This is beautiful , different but great, hugs / / :)

November 20, 2016 at 5:43 PM

Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2016 at 7:38 PM

great little tongue twister, Jan. Awesome picture.

November 18, 2016 at 2:16 AM

Thanks Andrea I had such fun with this poem - just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

November 17, 2016 at 12:32 PM

lol...I just sent Arthur an s tongue twister in response to his comment on my snake picture.

November 17, 2016 at 1:19 PM

ha ha ha - I wrote a tongue twister called Sally snake lol:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 17, 2016 at 11:26 AM

Scoffing six succulent spicy sausages silly Sally silently slipped away! Wow dear, Jan! Spectacular alliteration!

November 17, 2016 at 11:30 AM

Thanks Demetrios it only took a minute to write - i just love the gif image it makes me giggle when I see it:-) hugs Jan xx

November 17, 2016 at 9:24 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! This is such a fun tongue twister in the alliteration form. Great job:-) Alexis

November 17, 2016 at 9:27 AM

Thanks Alexis the gif is so darn funny - its better than the poem lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Boskovski

November 17, 2016 at 7:19 AM

HAHA a very amusing write you have here, lovely. Could you check out my latest poem, "Something called LIFE" and please tell me what you think of it. Thank you, and have a good day

November 17, 2016 at 7:59 AM

Thanks for dropping by will go read your poem now:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 17, 2016 at 6:35 AM

- Hilarious .... run for your life ... :))) - A 7, for silly sausage and you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)))

November 17, 2016 at 6:40 AM

ha ha thanks Anne Lise I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

November 17, 2016 at 5:51 AM

from image to date, what fun

November 17, 2016 at 6:04 AM

Thanks Scott its a silly poem which took just a minute to write the gif really makes me laugh:-) hugs jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 9:09 PM

LOL, so funny. My mind keeps wanting to interpret this one as erotic allegory, haha. ;-)

November 17, 2016 at 3:25 AM

If you ever see a 'sausage' that big do let me know lol:-) hugs jan xx

November 17, 2016 at 3:24 AM

ha ha ha. you and Darren are joined at the hip Jason lol:-) I guess Darren has told you all about me and my silly poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 6:07 PM

Ok you trying to kill me? I just about choked to death, laughing at this! The Gif is hilarious!

November 16, 2016 at 6:21 PM

No chocking on that sausage Arthur lol:-) I thought of the poem as I was walking home from the shops .. no I'd not purchased sausages lol... wrote the poem and then found the gif and it made me LOL:-) hugs jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 2:44 PM

Silly sausage very funny xxxx

November 16, 2016 at 6:22 PM

the gif makes me giggle Wendy:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

November 16, 2016 at 12:31 PM

Poor Silly Sally just can't get it right, lol. Fantastic clip. Barry

November 16, 2016 at 6:22 PM

Thanks Barry its fun isn't it lol:-) hugs jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 10:10 AM

very funny and the picture is hilarious!

November 16, 2016 at 6:24 PM

Thanks Ilene I found it after I'd written the poem and thought it was perfect to go with my silly poem:-) hugs jan xx

Stephen Pennell

November 16, 2016 at 8:54 AM

what a silly sausage you are jan

November 16, 2016 at 6:28 PM

ha ha ha thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 8:43 AM

Wow Allison!! Methinks you're a learned master for sure in the "Alliteration Arts"!! The verses are silly sausage superb and the running rabid sausage runner in your posted picture is hilarious!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary

November 16, 2016 at 6:29 PM

Thanks Gary I do love alliteration as a poetic device:-) I thought of the poem as I returned home from the shops (no sausages were purchased lol) when I found the gif it was perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 8:39 AM

Looks like Sally needs a bromo for that heartburn. I really love your alliterative humor Jan. another great tongue twister for sure.

November 16, 2016 at 6:30 PM

Thanks Daniel its a fun write glad you enjoyed it:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 8:15 AM

Esses are surely the best//So stoutly they stand up to the test//of sounding so silly//when Jan sings a dilly//so I snicker and snigger with zest! hugssssssssssssssses ~ j

November 16, 2016 at 6:30 PM

lol thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 7:46 AM

erm... that reminds me of something Jan 0.o Love it :D

November 16, 2016 at 9:10 PM

Curiosity Piqued, lol. ;-)

November 16, 2016 at 12:13 PM

BEHAVE lol:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 6:18 AM

Sightly sick, silly n sensational! :) Funny video too...

November 16, 2016 at 6:21 AM

LOL Thanks Paloma:-) hugs Jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 6:11 AM

Yes and how it chases her! Love the video!

November 16, 2016 at 6:14 AM

I wrote the poem found the clip thought it was so funny!:-) hugs Jan xx

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