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Silken Strokes

At first I did not see the diamond dew It was then in love with the orange shroud As I felt the sounds of drum, deep in you We saw our nimble lips in drifting cloud   At first I didn’t hear the golden whisper The two larks lost themselves in the warm sun As I felt in you those collapsing stars The world in me could see the race begun   Down the mountain momentous moonlit trains Through caves of dances in a speed of light Towards a harvest of ecstatic grains Amidst the explosion of dynamite   The field looked amber in the nascent sun Of the silken strokes we so fondly spun _______________________________________________________ 03/2/2017

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Date: 2/3/2017 5:59:00 PM
An extremely inspiring piece you have crafted here, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/3/2017 3:26:00 PM
This is an extremely passionate sonnet, Probir. I especially love the third stanza:)
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Date: 2/4/2017 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ... What comes up in the course of pensive thoughts, I try to hold them with words ... sometimes I succeed , sometimes they go back ... and pains in the thoughts ...
Date: 2/3/2017 2:07:00 PM
A Sonnet to reckon with its passion and images dear, Probir! Excellent work my friend! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 5:36:00 AM
If you evaluate so, it sure has some worth ... thank you so much ...
Date: 2/3/2017 12:50:00 PM
The power of passion emerges through your description of nature's blessings. What it must be like to take a nature walk with someone who senses such magic and romance! Lovely work, Probir
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Date: 2/4/2017 5:38:00 AM
That would have of course brought out far better poems! ... Thank you so much for your nice appreciation ...

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