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SILENT PARTNER
Since childhood, you’ve been my shadowy companion. Like gravity’s pull, you’re invisible always supportive, nurturing my unconfessed desires. I grew up and found you handsome and alluring. With your charismatic voice you murmur, “Just one more time, just one more taste.” Over time, you became toxic, speaking only the language of longing. Like a siren’s call in the stillness, you drew me to the precipice of my own unraveling. Together, we’ve navigated this earthly existence. I often stumbled when seeking the sacred while you pulled at the frayed threads of my resolve. Yet in this tangled partnership, lies a truth~ the Divine whispers, reminding me of redemption’s embrace, a grace that comforts me in my failures and weaknesses. Though I walk with you, my silent partner, I see you not as a foe, but as a teacher, a chance to turn my failures into wisdom. Poem written for “How Well Do You Know Your Partner” Poetry Contest, Poet Destroyer A, sponsor, 6/20/2025

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Date: 6/22/2025 6:38:00 AM
Nicely written, Yellow Rose. Love the ending...Best wishes in the contest!! Also, Thanks for stopping by and commenting...much appreciated! Charlie
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Date: 6/21/2025 11:35:00 AM
A dark partner signifies a vice or unfit desire in this fantastic poem about your convoluted connection to your lover. It depicts a battle for self-discovery and growth, showing how it can be both difficult and worthwhile. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:30:00 PM
I sincerely thank you for your visit and for your insightful comments...ones that are spot on. Your ability to 'digest' the many layers of a poem is stellar. Appreciate your encouragement, Yellow Rose
Date: 6/21/2025 10:10:00 AM
I think this was a wonderful write to read. What A Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.......
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/21/2025 1:32:00 PM
thank you, dear Paula, for your visit and for your kind words. Have a lovely weekend, yellow rose
Date: 6/21/2025 9:57:00 AM
Whoa! Deep thoughts and great poetry, Rose. This is a good entry for the contest, it shouldn't need luck to do well. A poet friend in Texas, Tex
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/21/2025 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Tex, for your encouragement and your thoughtful comments...always look forward to reading your comments, yellow rose.

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