Silenced

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Lind30SU 7-7-7-9 Unrhymed Syllables

Created by Robert Lindley

mouth unable to form words then sounds of desperation inspired by wisdoms presence awestruck I retreat into silence

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Date: 4/18/2022 4:45:00 PM

how many times I've been awestruck and silenced, unable to speak! Reminds me of those words, "be still and know I'm God."

Bill Baker
Date: 4/18/2022 4:48:00 PM

Good point, Sara. We should try it more often. :-) Bill

Date: 4/18/2022 3:54:00 PM

Hello bill, no words could be formed! silence is a good thing,you can hear your own thoughts. Your poetess friend Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2022 5:51:00 AM

Hello Bill, I have noticed in the silence i can hear my thoughts. I hope you had a great Easter celebration. Your Poetess friend Darlene.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/18/2022 4:47:00 PM

A wise comment, Darlene, my poetess friend. Thanks, Bill