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Silence For Whispers

traded SILENCE for WHISPERS to fear not my fate- subdued in a room with walls mirrored, slanted just enough for me to peek at ALL my FLAWS; and in EACH breath my eyes inhale defects my mind embraces (lungs e x h a l i n g hope…) no longer will I enter rooms that REFLECT a tomb
"for I am lost- longing to be found without fear" -me
August 29, 2019 Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines - Poetry Contest Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/3/2019 3:17:00 PM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Prose poetry. How do you always write something that touches me so deeply? Well done !
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Date: 9/2/2019 5:04:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2019 12:52:00 PM
mirrors always show us things we see from within our mind... i never see what others see and avoid them when feeling down... great write, congrats on your top win :) hugs
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Date: 9/2/2019 12:01:00 PM
- I already knew this would top the list, L.L. :) - Congratulations on your great first place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 11:15:00 AM
I love the concept of trading silence for whispers...it's where to start change. Congrats on a great win.
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Date: 9/2/2019 11:06:00 AM
Luloo I knew this one would rate high on a win! Congrats my friend!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 10:24:00 AM
Best to avoid the slanted mirrors, Luloo, nicely penned my friend. congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/30/2019 8:19:00 AM
Wow! Amazed at this stunning sight! Loved it!;)
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:43:00 PM
- A tomb always give some fear ... fear of the unknown - A beautiful poem, L.L. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) * S-mail
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:15:00 PM
That was really cool, really well done. Bravo!!! Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:39:00 PM
thank you dear Chris! :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 1:39:00 PM
thank you dear Chris! :)-luloo

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