Silence

silence..unyielding armour to defy ruthless cruelty of tongue October 2, 2022 For "Power Of Silence" Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul checked syllables (17 syllables)by HMS.com

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2022 9:54:00 AM

Very thought provoking. Congrats, Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/15/2022 10:40:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate your kind comment.

Valsa George

Date: 10/14/2022 7:12:00 PM

Such a wise thought ! A real gem.... Mala. Congratulations on your win and putting this thought across for everyone to ponder.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/15/2022 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Valsa. I loved yours too! Appreciate your kind comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2022 1:21:00 PM

- Excellent written, Mala :) - a line many should read - Congratulations on your winning proposal - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/14/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Truly appreciate your comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/14/2022 9:48:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your win! There is such profound depth in your words - like a well of restoring silence! Love the image of silence as "unyielding armour" - protection for the tender heart. Take care dear friend! Blessings, prayers for your project and a hug!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/14/2022 9:55:00 AM

Dear Sam, Does this line echo the same sentiment as in “Crumpled Rose”?

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/14/2022 9:52:00 AM

Thank you, Sam. I find so much peace and support in your kind and strong words. Love ~ Mala