Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Sigh of Yesteryear

Nostalgic rumblings harken back, rattling on and on:
Where have the sweet dreams of yesteryear gone,
Why does starry night yield to nightmares of dawn
In shattered, dismantled, promised land of bygone.

First kiss was just a prologue to prized budding start
Which blossomed love passions of youthful heart,
How longingly now recall the pleadings of romance
As intimate allures of past rekindle in doting glance.

Treasured rhythms now echo a compassionate song
From albums of recollections still strumming along
In keepsake laughs enticing tempo of riverside walks
And flirtatious stories inducing seductive secret talks.

When tears grieve hopelessly, and it hurts when I cry
Fondly I recall, smile of your eyes, gazing starlit sky,
And that’s when I call your name, but hear no reply
Except for the voice of past uttering a saddened sigh.

Alas! It’s been long since our goodbyes inflicted woe,
But I still ponder, if you ever look back~ and say hello,
To wonderment of musings longing passions of yore,
Courting endearment of love, wishing there was more.

December 1, 2021
Placed 3rd: “Y” Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Yesteryear

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Evelyn Judy Buehler October 21, 2023 at 1:46 PM Beautiful and engrossing, though somewhat sad. Love the final verse. Belated congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2022 at 10:37 AM If you have fond memories you recall you can bet she does too. Let that cheer you. I hope your fondest memories never fade, only the sad ones. I enjoyed your relatable poem Vijay. I could feel your loss. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2021 at 9:32 AM Big congrats, Vijay, and happy holiday time. Do you have holidays right now? Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:27 AM Happy holidays to you Andrea, as well. Yes--we will be celebrating with family.

Jennifer Proxenos December 18, 2021 at 7:49 AM Congratulations my friend on this wonderful win, so deserved. Nostalgia, brings back fond memories of yester year. be well my friend may all your wishes come to fruition with the coming New year, enjoy the festive season Vijay, hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:28 AM Thank you Jennifer.

Constance La France December 11, 2021 at 7:31 AM Vijay, congratulations on your Third Place win in my "Y" Contest. Oh yes, I know all about the sighs of yesterday ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:28 AM Much appreciate Constance. Many thanks.

Joanna Daniel December 8, 2021 at 5:50 AM A heart-tugging poem, Vijay, beautiful and leaves one wanting more:) congratulations:) Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:28 AM Thank you Jo.

Mystic Rose Rose December 6, 2021 at 3:16 PM what a blessing it is to read your poetry Vijay, congrats on your win. :) Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:27 AM Thank you Vienna.

Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 7:32 AM Congratulations on your win. Memories are what life is filled with. A beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day/week............... Vijay Pandit December 20, 2021 at 5:27 AM Thank you Paula.

Eve Roper December 4, 2021 at 9:54 PM Vijay, your pen never seems to run out of ink. Beautiful and very romantic in nostalgic thoughts . Congratulations on your win. Vijay Pandit December 5, 2021 at 5:02 AM Thank you Eve. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Jennifer Proxenos December 4, 2021 at 8:14 AM Yesteryear love, memories, thoughts and longings pop up in out lives, especially as the years pass and and we let ourselves drift back in time. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Vijay Pandit December 5, 2021 at 5:02 AM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

Bill Baker December 4, 2021 at 7:58 AM Beautifully written poem of love and loss. Last verse brought back my own memories of goodbyes and the excuiating pain followed by those memories of the passion of young love. Great entry Vijay. I especially like all the adjective you use to enhance and give feeling to words. Bill Vijay Pandit December 5, 2021 at 5:02 AM Thank you Bill for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your detailed feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 4, 2021 at 2:37 AM The harsher the reality is, the sweeter the memories appear to be, my friend, Vijay! What a glorious poem! It is among your best literate creations. Deserves recognition. Good luck! Blessings. Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:37 AM Your vote of confidence my friend is very rewarding. Much appreciate your visit and your gracious remarks. Many thanks. Regards.

Besma Riabi Dziri December 4, 2021 at 1:46 AM There will always be a sigh of nostalgia over sweet dreams, youth passion and romance.. We will always treasure a first promising date, a first love though painful.. "a compassionate song".. and secretly shed tears for a golden past.. WOW, dear Vijay! How wonderfully you composed your Rhyme! Of ineffable beauty! How I relate to such a Sigh Of Yesteryear! A fave and an outshining Gem worthy of being honoured and acknowledged.. My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:35 AM So wonderful to hear you can relate my friend. I appreciate your analysis and comments that are always on mark and so very pleasant to read. Many thanks, Besma. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Regards.

Supraja Kannan December 4, 2021 at 12:20 AM A wonderful write as usual... Pondering on the special sweet memories always gives a blissful feel and you have beautifully expressed those memories and yearnings through your words... "When tears grieve hopelessly, and it hurts when I cry Fondly I recall, smile of your eyes, gazing starlit sky" These lines are so moving... Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:32 AM Much enjoyed your insightful remarks, Supraja. Your visit and comments are always appreciate. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Ann Peck December 3, 2021 at 2:38 PM There are those special memories we keep near to look at now and again. I loved your poem, Vijay. Congratulations on your win! Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:31 AM So very kind of you Ann. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 1:41 PM Keepsake laughs, seductive secret talks, and the first two lines of last verse. I never wonder if I’m thought of but who knows…maybe. Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:30 AM Glad you liked the poem, Kim. Much appreciate your thoughts. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner December 3, 2021 at 8:49 AM So lovely, the yearning of nostalgia, the longing for the past to return, the voices of yesteryear still reach out to us~ Vijay Pandit December 4, 2021 at 7:29 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Michelle. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar December 3, 2021 at 5:42 AM Some sweet memories of the past can never be erased from the mind... very true Vijayji... an emotional write so well penned in wonderful chosen rhymes with an apt title... Like many said below, I too loved the fourth stanza more and I see the alliterative beauty in both the third and fourth stanzas. Best wishes in the contest. God bless... ~ Ani Vijay Pandit December 3, 2021 at 6:09 AM You always take the time to write a detailed, meaningful response, Ani. Glad you liked the third and fourth stanzas. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole December 2, 2021 at 8:39 PM Yes, the heart feels an ache.. "wishing there was more". The reason: We are human and those emotions linger within and tangle around each other. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit December 3, 2021 at 6:06 AM They sure do my friend. Your tender insights are much appreciate, Brandy. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile December 2, 2021 at 10:30 AM The yearning and the wonderment of yesteryear is clearly on display here Vijay! Heartfelt nostalgia runs throughout, Happy Thursday!! Vijay Pandit December 3, 2021 at 6:05 AM Nostalgia it is. Much appreciate Mike. Many thanks.

Eve Roper December 2, 2021 at 9:12 AM Beautiful,Vijay. Heartfelt and moving memories. Always your best work. Eve Vijay Pandit December 3, 2021 at 6:04 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Eve. Truly honored. Many thanks.

Paul Callus December 2, 2021 at 5:39 AM Emotional and sentimental memories which will forever linger in the mind. Another poem which makes you proud, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit December 2, 2021 at 6:48 AM So glad you stooped by, Paul, with your insightful feedback. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks. Regards.

Quoth Theraven December 1, 2021 at 6:11 PM Vijay, "Fondly I recall, smile of your eyes, ~~ gazing starlit sky, And that’s when I call your name, but hear no reply" Oh, my lord. Truly felt this sigh to the core of my being. This year winds down. Freedom comes, one way or another. -Richard Vijay Pandit December 2, 2021 at 6:47 AM Every time you visit you bring cheer to my page with nuggets of your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Richard. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar December 1, 2021 at 10:10 AM Memories of lost love will never be forgotten. Your poem is right on the dot. Imagery and emotion take first places. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit December 2, 2021 at 6:45 AM So nice to hear--especially from you. Much appreciate and value your feedback, as always. Many thanks, Victor.

Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 8:00 AM "Where have the sweet dreams of yesteryear gone, Why does starry night yield to nightmares of dawn" Times have changed and yesteryears leave behind nostalgic memories. Another entry for a sure win ! As ever, incomparable in poetic beauty, dear Vijay ! Vijay Pandit December 2, 2021 at 6:44 AM Your visits are always joyful with special poetic insights. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks, Valsa.

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