Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Sienna Oak

sienna oak droops low

khaki-like trunk stained in brown,

leaves flapping on roads

crumpled by autumnal prints...

weaving a fabric of tree's hue.




Maureen's Mc Greavy's  New or Old Less is Mo Little Poem 
Re-post 2/23/2019
~ Not entered in any contest

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Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2017 at 11:21 PM Alas...this never showed up on the contest!

M. L. Kiser July 7, 2017 at 8:35 PM Personally, I think you have a winner with this one. Good luck.

Joseph May July 6, 2017 at 2:18 PM Beautiful tanka Nette ...best wishes

Akkina Downing July 4, 2017 at 4:13 PM So creative, and total awesomeness :) Good luck in the contest :)

Jeremy Smith July 3, 2017 at 5:28 AM Beautiful nette :) I love fall! Best of luck in the contest I hope to see both our names!!

Connie Marcum Wong July 3, 2017 at 4:49 AM A very lovely entry Nette. Painted by your master hand! : )

Joanna Daniel July 3, 2017 at 1:33 AM Nice imagery, Nette, you have painted this picture perfectly:)

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2017 at 10:52 PM very creative, Nette. I especially loved lines 3 and 4 image!

Paul Callus July 2, 2017 at 4:58 PM I can picture these khaki elms in my mind, Nette, but I'll look them up to see whether I'm walking along the right lane:) gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Ashley Conte July 2, 2017 at 4:05 PM Very interesting color picture so aptly used in painting a view in which I feel I'm right there, enjoying the beauty along with the author! Very well described; impressive.

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2017 at 11:03 AM livia, my comment to daniel was directed to your stream; a technical glitch?.. my computer got an error in application..yes, i had to edit due to 5-line rule.. huggs

Lyva Marty July 2, 2017 at 10:42 AM Impressive artwork; "khaki imagery'. I read this earlier; was it revised? Thank you.

Daniel Turner July 2, 2017 at 10:39 AM Interesting form, nette. I like the way you roam:) Lyva Marty July 2, 2017 at 10:45 AM changed the form per rules of the contest, daniel... honored by your feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2017 at 7:54 AM - Great written, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 7:05 AM I like how you have done this one, Nette! Best of luck to you