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Sienna Oak

sienna oak droops low khaki-like trunk stained in brown, leaves flapping on roads crumpled by autumnal prints... weaving a fabric of tree's hue. Maureen's Mc Greavy's New or Old Less is Mo Little Poem Re-post 2/23/2019 ~ Not entered in any contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2017 11:21:00 PM

Alas...this never showed up on the contest!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/7/2017 8:35:00 PM

Personally, I think you have a winner with this one. Good luck.

Joseph May

Date: 7/6/2017 2:18:00 PM

Beautiful tanka Nette ...best wishes

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/4/2017 4:13:00 PM

So creative, and total awesomeness :) Good luck in the contest :)

Jeremy Smith

Date: 7/3/2017 5:28:00 AM

Beautiful nette :) I love fall! Best of luck in the contest I hope to see both our names!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/3/2017 4:49:00 AM

A very lovely entry Nette. Painted by your master hand! : )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2017 1:33:00 AM

Nice imagery, Nette, you have painted this picture perfectly:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2017 10:52:00 PM

very creative, Nette. I especially loved lines 3 and 4 image!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2017 4:58:00 PM

I can picture these khaki elms in my mind, Nette, but I'll look them up to see whether I'm walking along the right lane:) gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Ashley Conte

Date: 7/2/2017 4:05:00 PM

Very interesting color picture so aptly used in painting a view in which I feel I'm right there, enjoying the beauty along with the author! Very well described; impressive.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2017 11:03:00 AM

livia, my comment to daniel was directed to your stream; a technical glitch?.. my computer got an error in application..yes, i had to edit due to 5-line rule.. huggs

Lyva Marty

Date: 7/2/2017 10:42:00 AM

Impressive artwork; "khaki imagery'. I read this earlier; was it revised? Thank you.