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Sick Love Sick

He held on to your frail love with a velvet iron fist Scarlet finger imprints ... bruised bracelet on your wrist showed you the depression bends of his obsessive love How deep, how sick ... How twisted below his vile bile desires flowed in your stomach pit It made you vomit sick, ill vomit sick But he loved your spewed impotent rejections; he lapped up all of it, every last bit of it He had a compulsive fixation to taste the sweat of your fear, mingled with his fear of you leaving him A freedom he would never let you get Over his dead body was his favorite threat phrase, as he petted your pretty throat with a tight grip from his iron fist Spiked dog collar was his short leash of jealousy attached to your every movements Your French poodle eyes made him so love sick Your Lassie voice made his heart beat so feverish And drooling over your queen Afghan body, he didn’t ever wanna get well none to quick He had a love for you that was sick love sick Intense was his rage, whenever he saw you from afar talking to anyone you said was a friend Death bangs of his iron fists on your backdoor one night, gave you the courage to pull the trigger hard ... again and again, until you fainted — Seeing the iron handcuff blood of his twisted chain love was so sickening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/30/2017 3:34:00 PM
Damn this is really dark and not healthy at all.. I see your dark pen took form today.. expressed graphically as always.. you really know how to create images in your poetry...
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:38:00 PM
This is so intense--didn't quite expect the ending--a very emotional journey !
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:17:00 PM
Wow Freddie!!! This is very dark!! Such great imagery and strong phrases paint the picture of this very sick man and the woman who is the object of his atrocities. I loved the first four lines ... completely drew me in. Amazing write!!! ~ Judy
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