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My room, the suite, seemed too small. I felt like I’d been in my room forever. I’d developed a scratchy sense of stuckness and a fresh, itchy awareness of dust particles floating in the stifling, still air that made me want to stop breathing in so much. But I didn’t, categorically, have the energy to get up and focusing seemed like a lot of effort. I had a big midterm test, first thing this morning and it laid me to waste, mentally. I think I did well but it was a feat. Whenever I feel lifeless and weak, I start to fear I’m coming down with something. But then, everyone’s tired. The suite seems unnaturally quiet, as if no one even has the energy to command our ever-listening AI to play a playlist, so silence ruled by exhausted default. It’s as if a low-pressure area had descended to hold off a brush of refreshing ozone and rain. Could I rouse my posse of symbiotic sort-of siblings for an outing somewhere - like Toad’s bar - just across the street? My door was open, so I called out, rather weakly, “Let’s go out!” Someone, (Lisa sprawled out on the red corduroy couch?) groaned listlessly from the common area. “My treat!” I updogged. Five minutes later, it was showers all around. I love a good shower. A shower’s where I ponder over the big questions, because answers seem to come quickly there. I imagine I’d be wise beyond words if I had a house with a waterfall running through it, like one of those amazing, Frank Loid Wright masterpieces. . . Songs for this: The Duke Is Gone by Chuck Senrick Cannock Chase by Labi Siffre

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Date: 10/27/2024 10:26:00 AM
Well you could always try marry DT he has a waterfall in his tower on 5th Avenue, but you would need a very strong stomach, much stronger than the one needed for your opening stanza lol! Toad’s bar sounds like you made the right choice Anais, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/28/2024 2:25:00 AM
I know that Anais, hopefully the majority of voters turn him down too :)
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/27/2024 9:30:00 PM
I'd never say yes to anything DT related, David, never.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2024 10:43:00 AM
Is that a yes?
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/27/2024 10:41:00 AM
DT, PleZ =P
Date: 10/27/2024 6:07:00 AM
Well, my showers only last five minutes so no time to brainstorm. I know someone who's known for taking two hours showers. You could create an opus in that amount of time
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/27/2024 10:30:00 AM
On the average class morning I have to keep it brief as well but it still works. I'd prune like a 90-year-old in a 2-hour shower.

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