Show Me What You Mean, I Can'T I'M An Over Explainer
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I'm in my hammock
Wearing fluffy pyjamas and slippers
With the dog
Just pondering how I could show rather than tell. Could you imagine it via my words?
The siren in the distance grabs my attention, pulling me out of my breeze laden daydreams. There is coolness in the air that soothes my soul and my brow whilst I am insulated against the world, warm and cradled against the backdrop of a day without sun.
I am rocked gently, held by invisible arms that do not judge my presence. The breeze continues to sweep across my face reminding me that concerns can be put aside.
I am warm and safe but someone somewhere has just started building garden furniture... You know, I was almost onto something for a second.
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2023
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