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a true haiku

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/10/2009 1:18:00 PM

Lovely image and comparison, Brian. I am in search of the beginning of this game of tag! Thank you for your kind words of welcome. It is so nice to be back. Love, Robin

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/9/2009 8:15:00 PM

good work! Brian!...jim

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2009 12:20:00 PM

What a wonderful, softly spoken poem! Just lovely! ~ Best regards, Carrie

Elaine George

Date: 9/9/2009 10:50:00 AM

Like the soldiers that lie beneath them. Beautiful and oh! so fragile. Touched me deeply with this one, Brian. Elaine Thank you for the honour of 2nd place in your Hymn of Harvest contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2009 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Brian. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 9/9/2009 9:17:00 AM

Beautifully written Brian. Isn't that the truth....Love Light Truth Patricia

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/9/2009 9:16:00 AM

Well fielded and nice pass , Brian ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2009 9:12:00 AM

Lovely poem with a message of truth. Good job, Brian!