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Short Dance

gently flickering swept up in delightful waltz since our life is short

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/27/2022 9:18:00 PM
Do not simply diddle, for life may pass in a twinkle.... ! So have a delightful waltz and on your toes twiddle.... ! Like it dear friend
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Date: 5/27/2022 5:32:00 PM
I like it. Dance while you still can.
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Date: 5/27/2022 8:33:00 AM
very nice. It reminds me of us as candles flickering down to die.
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Date: 5/26/2022 6:42:00 PM
Yes! Let life sweep us off our feet -- while we can! Nicely penned, Lasaad! :) gw
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