Shocked

the look of silence after your walls have fallen in full surrender

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/24/2019 1:09:00 PM

This is not a good look for me... I well know it, however... Excellence in words, brief yet a mountain of meaning. Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2019 7:23:00 PM

wow, so expressive!! Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/28/2019 11:20:00 PM

Yes I still love this piece. I could not remember who's it was, I am not surprised ;) Congratulations on your win! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/28/2019 10:36:00 PM

Poignant write. Congrats on your win, PM.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/15/2018 10:33:00 AM

True and scary when those walls fall. Congrats on the win.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/20/2018 11:09:00 PM

Back to congratulate you again on a top win. Well done!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/16/2018 11:49:00 AM

Love your off the wall piece here, clever. Salutations on the thought and your placement - deserving of applause.

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/15/2018 8:08:00 PM

Super Magicicada, congratulations on your top spot! Mick

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/15/2018 7:51:00 PM

congrats on your win!

John Lawless

Date: 6/15/2018 5:48:00 PM

Well Done, congrats on the top spot...this one settled on me like melting ice...

Roy Pett

Date: 6/15/2018 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win P.M, great haiku. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2018 12:59:00 PM

- A beautiful haiku on top of the winning list :) - Congratulations, P.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/15/2018 11:43:00 AM

This fabulous , P.M.Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~' *

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/15/2018 9:38:00 AM

Congratulations for your top win! Excellent :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2018 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your top placement in this contest! A haiku written in the style of the masters - Bravo! Hugs. Pandita

Constance La France

Date: 6/15/2018 8:43:00 AM

PM. congratulations on your placement with this beautifully penned Haiku, hope all is well with you. Constance

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/15/2018 8:31:00 AM

This was one of the easiest to judge P.M., an impacting affecting write, exactly what I was hoping for; first place with first read. Excellent piece! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo

P.M. Richter
Date: 6/29/2018 9:56:00 PM

A sincere thank you to Maureen and everyone who commented :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/18/2018 1:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Profound and thought provoking... I like it.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/15/2018 10:20:00 PM

Lovely haiku, P.M. - your gem leave the reader wanting to take a moment to let it sink in so to appreciate. Congrats on your most deserved podium finish.