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Shipwreck

Shipwreck Sure fingers grip Quivering lips caressed by mist Subversion in an inverse universe Obtuse life married to a hopeful mantra Division of these harsh seas I seek Of this boat captain I am Water erodes nothing but the iron it's made of Oxidized severely weakened this handcrafted monster I built is No anchor or tether Turn back never Event horizon and eventuality ring in my ears Tepid eyes search these hostile waters Once Id found it The journey to it was long and egregious Cast out and banished I yearn for this paradise I'd like to call home My thoughts are lost in this sea riddled with glass jars My worst fear Sunrise illuminates the ferocity of what is ahead Focus and determination scorch my features I remember that moment This hidden paradise eludes me My vessel Elizabeth Her vengeance is evident with a glance to my wake Best for a lasting uncharted effort Released my grip for another Firm I grasp Two clicks All ahead full

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2016 12:02:00 PM

Hi Charles, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:34:00 AM

Charles, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lin Lane

Date: 4/28/2016 7:39:00 AM

Captain, Charles. Looking at the sea before you is so much better than looking at the wake behind you. You've used wonderfully expressive phrases. ;) Lin

Charles Palmer
Date: 4/28/2016 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Lin! I appreciate you reading :)

Moon Flower

Date: 4/27/2016 8:46:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Charles. :)

Charles Palmer
Date: 4/28/2016 9:46:00 AM

Ms Flower, thank you for the warm welcome!