Shine

SHINE Mother shows the light for her child to shine . Mom being guide, idol, the unique one. Care of Mom and faith of child to combine. Child Moon to glow by rays of Mother Sun As shiny Sun Mother always to blaze Mother shows the light for her child to shine. Life of child illuminates to glaze. Care of Mother, bliss of child to entwine. Bond of Mother-Child never to decline. Child sparks as cheerful blooms on mother tree. Mother shows the light for her child to shine. Mother hugs her child to glitter in glee. Glances of Mom as glow of Cynosure bright at night, glistening star shining divine. Shower of blessings from Mom, always sure. Mother shows the light for her child to shine. 04/13/21 'Writing Prompt-Shine' Contest by Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 4/22/2021 4:14:00 PM

Anisha, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this Quatern poem, well done, love _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2021 3:18:00 AM

Ahh!! Interesting to put your science knowledge to work in a poem. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Your presence at my page was encouraging. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 4/15/2021 12:06:00 AM

Very well put Anisha. It is the place of the mother to be the guiding light for the child. A child will inherently do what the parents do but the seldom listen to what you say unless your words are backed up by your actions. Well done. God Bless, JB